flow2crazy vs upfront
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-22-04 at 12:48 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

flow2crazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 11:49 PM.

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-04 11:54 PM.

So much ice on my chest, under my nose, on my vouges,
That these hoes be thinkin I was raised by rich eskimos/

my punchlines r crazy but not as nuts as that cocaine inda ya nose/
its simply exquisite when I rock these hoes /
and put my nuts in their mouth like some Rocky Road/(hah)

niggas love me cuz the weight i hold/
and i aint talking bout drugs im talking greatest flow/
so i get paid like an HMO/
and im bout to cop a CLEAR COLORED HUMMER call it H2-O/

jus give up mayne who do u think ya tryna touch/
im sumthin like a bullet proof slut cept im hatin dem nuts/

You mother fuckers are nothing, you cannot harm me/
I'll resurrect every aborted baby and start an army/

Storm the planet hunting you down cuz I'm on a mission/
To split your body into a billion one-celled organisms/

I boiled it down to this... either u suck or ur holdin back~
Made my choice and im gonna tell u upfront that u wack~
You freeposted tellin me that i suck in a flow~
If dats tru then y my punches leave u stuck in da ground like a scarecrow~
Ur style is dull like cuttin grass and watchin it regrow~
The odds of u winnin is about a million to one ratio~
Even a hurricane cant compare to my unstopable wrath~
Just readin my rhymes messes wit ur mind like u back in 5th grade math~
U from philly thats why most ur lines are just fillers~
You couldnt hold against me if ur rhymes were pillars~
For real though u gota 2 stop frontin n sayin u dope~
Since right now surrendering is your only hope~

~uppin numero uno~

tell me who u think won hahah uppin^



yall kno who nice

uppin again cmon dont sleep on this... ill return the favor if u drop a vote

aint no 1 postin got damn ^^^^^^^^^^^uppin cmon lol its w/e this been up fa s0o long

Voted For: flow2crazy

upfront a whole verse about yaself in a battle??!!no save that for open mic punches were ok disses sucked vocab needs work flow and stryctyre was ok also a 3/10
flow good flow and structure was ok good vocab ok punches and disses were better then upfronts and got you this a 4/10
no hate flow had better punches and disses so i say he gets this

i kno i wasnt even thinkin i kno thanks fa da criteque its helpin

Voted For: flow2crazy

flow2crazy just be comin with it on here...punches were tight and flow was very good. A few of his lines were streched, and he was fightin to keep em in there. You need to work on ya wordplay a lil more, hype it up to throw the punch and shit cuz.

Upfront you aint really have any punches, were tryin vocab though. You aint use wordplay either. He got you on punches though cuz. Come harder next time

This was feedback posted for flow2crazy
 

good job homie. just peepin the polls .

uppin

Voted For: flow2crazy

upfront- every single line of yours was filler, u didnt get to dissin, no u didn't diss, u didn't get to talkin bout your opponent till half way thru ya verse, thats whack to talk about yourself that much. u gotta diss that bitch wit wordplay and mean things about his skills. and what he's not capable of.

flow- yo didn't have shit either, but u pointed that shit towards this cat, which beats selfgloryfing shit anyday. so i gotta give it to ya.

I boiled it down to this... either u suck or ur holdin back~
Made my choice and im gonna tell u upfront that u wack
^^^only line i actually liked in this battle

ya'll keep workin, but read tutorials to know how to do this shit, so u dont lose alot of battles *upfront* ha.

well return the shit on my emergingmc07 battle PLEASE and keep the shit honest. and explain what u liked and didn't like i did, the links in my sig VVVVV