upfront vs certifiedthug
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 10

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 01:46 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:53 AM.

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:53 AM.

iight yo check it im comin wit the verbal assault u try n come at me but sound like a retart then when i spit my lines its like tha u.s wit tha attack on iraq but i dunt play no games i get down n seriouse so dunt come at me wit dis s**t

u so0 certified wheres y0o card/
oh thas riite ya left ya fake id at the quik e mart/

listen dumb shit u rep nuthin but yo self/
u think u a thug u prolly never been on tha other side of a jail cell/

fake ass nigga wen i said slug u stopped and looked around/
thas too bad cuz by the time u looked up i was lookin down/
at yo ass on the ground/
i got ridda ya body and labled yo ass as lost but never found/

nigga jus stop typin we all kno whose the best/
u rappin me's like a blind man tryna type aint no contest/

get out go home jus close ya eyes/
try ta reminise on how my style has u hynotized/
u can b supa man and ill b tha crypyonite/
if u eva wanna lose u can eitha box me or battle me again on dis site///////

~peace~

Voted For: upfront

lol lol do i really need to explain dis plz its done deal

i give it ta my nigga upfront im rusty as shyt right now n got da rules mixed up but u kno ima come bak lol

This was feedback posted for CeRtIfIeDtHuG
 

yoooooo.....CT..set up a battle for us pm me first so i know you wanna batlle. get at me

Voted For: upfront

upfront:

this vote goes to you, for one you actually had a verse, it was eligable, his was unstructed, lacking of words and without a purpose, you had aighg tflow, struct. was aight, your wordplay was aight. but you need some vocab.

vote:upfront

return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...02&page=3&pp=15

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

yo
punches=thug
meats=thug
multis=thug
begin=thug
end=thug
this cat gets evrthing when he only has 3 lines

Voted For: upfront

u got my v/ cause of better everything this cat has NO FLOW,STRUCTURE,METAPHORS,MULTIS,nothin at all and ur shit was pretty fuckin coo buddy!aight holla -1-

thanks fa da votes and rhymereapa u a dumb shit i acnt even start guessin on ur vote i dont hate but u obviousely do cuz its obviouse who won we battlin nex u think ya shit s0o tight

Voted For: upfront

Not a great battle but upfront easily takes it. Certifiedthugs verse was weak as hell. Needs elevating ALOT. Try splittin ya lines up and shit. Upfront, your verse was alright but could use some elevatin in vocab and creativity. Use some wit and murder him with a mix of funny n violent lines. Throw in some metaphors too.

v/ Upfront

Also could you please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304

Illl Battle And Rip Ya Ass Upfrint I Mean Look At Yo Shit Hince Your Record 0-2 Hahah But Im Not Sayin You Suck

iight thanks fo da votes but y0o rhymereapa less do this