DrasticMeasureZ vs Demon Pyrokronix
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 03:46 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 07:12 AM.

Call me doctor Kron/ one and only lyrical surgeon,
I'll operate and diagnose you to be a H.O.S emergin (Hall of shamer),
Ya measures ain't workin/ might as well pack in and quit,
Dunno what drastik means but I bet young boys don't benefit,
No one's cares when you die/ we'll sing songs and rejoice,
I wanted to battle BANG/ accepting ya challenge was second choice, (see "Time to go out with a Bang... bang")
Burn you to fuck ,leave ya madevolls and externals charred,
You want beef? Then start, we'll make ya home the graveyard,
God's creation of you was a fuckin quirk that went too far,
Coz your chaces of merkin Demon are about as empty as your avatar.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 10:50 AM.

Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...
The True Fact Is I'll leave you covered in "shit" like a faggets mat-ress....../
Leave You flamess like broken mat-ches Rhymes dont fraise me dawg you need more prac-tice..../
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../
Rhymes'll knock you so high You could stick your tongue out at left-eye..../
I Spit drive-by's Ya rhymes is unsteady as if I put a bullet in your left-thigh..../
No need for you to check-in like a horny boy "you'll get beat in a second...../
Lines'll leave you with a "red neck" Log off quick 'cause a win is what i reckon'.../

usin different style mayne

This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

using diff style....style didn't really work for you man, the flow was way off, and the structure is just wack, you had some good punches and multis but man, loose that style aight, demon you had a good verse, good punches, wordplay and all and you had the better structure and flow, i think this battle will go to demon.......jus feedback

Aight I don't know who will get this win, uppin for votes............................................. ....

Yo U Said I Had Good Punches And Good Wordplay And Multi'z Dont Look At The Struture Look What I Wrote Damn!................. Uppin

Yo Upped Dis Shit Mayne At Least 1 Person Has To Vote On Dis Yo I'll Return Fava's Just Vote Damn It

Yo Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote

Uppin, leave a link and I'll return the favour like I did with all the other guys who voted.

Word True Same Here

C'mmon why the hell won't you vote on this battle?

BTW Drastik just out of interest how many battles have you got open? Because if I look down the front lines all I see is DrastikmeasureZ vs... lmao. You'll have a really good record soon if you keep having that many battles open and winning them.

Yea Mayne Yo Yo Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Lol Cant Help It Mayne

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

didn't care 4 this style much, but it was still hard, u got my v cause
opener-DM
metas-DM
multis-DP
structure-DP
flow-DM
closer-DM
thats the breakdown so holla back -1-

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.