INFALLIBLE vs It's Elementary
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 12:37 AM

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It's Elementary has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 12:23 AM.

INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 12:28 AM.

lil young ass nigga, think u can fuck around, catch hot ones
and I ain't gotta go hard cause u ain't grown enough 2 hold guns

young buck thinkin of come up in the game
b 4 u even get in I'll DBO u fo ya fame

thought u was hard, I pulled ur card, and so u fold
got u a car, got u some bars, u how old?

u right "It's Elementary" how I'll school ur young ass
bet u ain't never drank a Olde E or chiefed on no grass

I'm like the beltway sniper, I'm not tryin ta brag but here
u need this # to this place that b makin body bags

Here's 14 lines for ya......

yo.............check it..............

His “car-rear”(career)’s bumped; his whole life’s is “wheel”(real) tough//
So long story short, instead of being born again, why don't you just grow up?//
Your bars are spaced away from each other, like you’re just trying to stutter//
Since you cant really fall, why don’t you fly away, the further, the better//
I make deliveries faster than the fiber-optic cables on the Disney ride you rode//
Genius do what it must, talent do what it can, and you should do what you're told//
The only time this wack mortal would flow is if he had jerked off and spoof//
Cashier at KFC asks what size bucket you wanted, you’d say the one on the roof//
This cat pretending he has a sense of over-confidence, when I can see him twitch//
Claiming you’re “phat”, when actually you eat your cereal out of a satellite dish//
Kid embarrassed by the elementary student, now he’s as red as a sack of tomatoes//
He isn't too sharp, in fact he's as quick-witted as an overstuffed sack of potatoes//
He thinks he has one of those mighty minds – yeah right, more like mighty empty//
We kinda all know you pretty much lose, but destroying you completely is tempting//

uppin for some votes....................................

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

Flow-Infallible
Punchlines-Infallible
Personals-neither
this was a close one but on the real Infall had better punchlines and flow he just put it down better and it sounded better

This was feedback posted for It's Elementary
 

Dont Worry Its Ova For U Infallible Dis Going To Be Yo Last Battle

Get Ready To Pack Yo Bagz Biter

~peace~

a yo I'm uppin 4 v's so I can close this battle out, honest 1's only aight -1-

This was feedback posted for It's Elementary
 

elem u won. u had more punches, weak punches, but more than infallible. infallible u had weak punches as well. structure goes to in, but flow goes to elem. also in u did the minimum, elem did almost the max. "The only time this wack mortal would flow is if he had jerked off and spoof//
Cashier at KFC asks what size bucket you wanted, you’d say the one on the roof//" haha not bad, not great but not bad. u seemed to say he wuz fat, and thats kinda weak but ya. peace

nigga I ain't hatin but shit the fuck up til u got enuff posts ta even vote, I went hella soft on this cat + I'ont even like battle rappin all u do is hate on the next nigga more than he does u and see who wins???? who gives a fuck. He just was talkin shit 2 another nigga I was IM'in talkin madd shit so I said I'd battle his young ass, n e how UPPIN 4 more v's!!!!!

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

betta flow...betta wordplay...betta structure...
infallible took it hands down...
vote...infallible.................

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