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SPuLâ„¢ 08-23-04 12:40 AM

Hittin' da Club- song. check it
 
yo, this another song I made, yo

www.soundclick.com/spul

it's the "hottest club banger" beat. gonna record it later.


(chorusx2)
Whenever I hit the club, ladies get to droppin'
Whenever I spit out hits, man, I'm never stoppin'
When a hater tries to front, I always end up knockin'
When my album comes out, you betta get to coppin'


When I step up in the club, shawty looks at me
Turns around to her friends, and asks, "Who is he?"
She wanna get all close and personal wit a playa
I go up and grab her hand, she says her name is Leah
As we dancin' on the floor, I get the urge to mate her
Try to make a move, but pushed back by a hat-er
He says, "See you later, bitch, that's my hoe
If you wanna front wit me, prepare to walk no mo."
I say, "Whoa! Slow down, big guy!
Neither of us, two dudes, wanna die."
"Then give me back my hoe, stop tryin' to steal her"
I say, "She ain't a hoe, and she ain't yo girl either"
He pulls out a knife, and then starts to charge
I knock him out wit one punch, even though he is large
I take a look down, "I'm the best, see, bitch?
Never...ever... test me, bitch!"

(chorusx2)
Whenever I hit the club, ladies get to droppin'
Whenever I spit out hits, man, I'm never stoppin'
When a hater tries to front, I always end up knockin'
When my album comes out, you betta get to coppin'



I chose to leave, and decided to go elsewhere
To a place so hot, in seconds, snow would melt there
The ladies were so fine, I totally lost my mind
I thought dog and cat, were 2 words that rhyme
I got back to earth, when one approached me
Her beauty could make you faint, even if you was a G
But what I didn't see, was she was the one faintin'
So I regained my cool, and didn't keep her waitin'
She wanted me, and I wanted her
An instant connection, hell yea, for sure
She called me over, givin' me a wink
I rushed over, throwin' away my drink
She wanted to go to my place, so I gave her a nod
As she left the club first, I scoped at her fine bod
As we left in my car, I felt like I won election
My only worry now, gettin' some protection

(chorusx2)
Whenever I hit the club, ladies get to droppin'
Whenever I spit out hits, man, I'm never stoppin'
When a hater tries to front, I always end up knockin'
When my album comes out, you betta get to coppin'


Soom fools be mad hatin', like they don't kno who I be
I'm SPuL aka Reckless, I ain't no wannabe G
I'll beat you so bad, and I'll swipe yo Range Rover
Jus like Lil' Flip, nigga... it's "Game Over"
But instead of chantin' "Flip", they all be chantin' "SPuL"
Like the '53 Sooners, I'm so UnstoppaBULL
I could knock yo ass out, wit jus one of my punches
It'll get you so bad, you won't even kno where lunch is
30-3, when I battle fools online
18 in a row, I should go live and make 'em mine
I'm always "In Da Club", I do it my own way
I say, "Fuck 50 Cent. Man, I got 50 K"
Now listen up, hatas kno I got the skill
And I'm jacked up wit mo money, than yo telephone bill
When my video hits BET... everybody gonna watch it
When my album comes out, even hatas are gonna cop it (haha)

(chorusx4)
Whenever I hit the club, ladies get to droppin'
Whenever I spit out hits, man, I'm never stoppin'
When a hater tries to front, I always end up knockin'
When my album comes out, you betta get to coppin'

uppin' for feedback. pc ~8~

BlackMagik 08-23-04 12:17 PM

shit was aight...wasnt feelin the first verse...structure was kinda fucked, wasnt followin at parts...so, overall, i give this a 6/10...
keep droppin tho

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-23-04 12:32 PM

yo spul that was a kinda weak song that time well not the 2 last verses the 1st you sucked no hate but tru it was bad 1st vers 4/10 the rest of the song 7/10 it was dope so overall you get 8/10


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