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JPoll vs $ik
Battle Rules:
5 bars MAX... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-24-04 at 03:55 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 03:56 AM.
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$ik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 04:00 AM.
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In ya grill onli candy-appears..maken u leave da game, u cant handle-ya-fears...
Slick bars like scandle-beers im fucken ur shyt up..next is the vandalist-cheers... Some1 told u wrong Em's-not-my-idle, onli thing u taken is ya Lost-Personals-Title... Throw mo lines den-my-rhyme-bible hittin dis fag like boxen-in-David's-Bridal... First..ur-not-funny...second off ya punches soft come correct its-bunny-dummy... Im flyen by u like Wizord Of Oz Monkeys hit u wit mo bars den travlen-drunkies... Does them lines..Look-At-My-Sig..like old people i burn ur skole so snatch-da-wig... Personals u tryed-to-dig..but got em wrong so i shoot em up like-sniper-pigs... JPoll not-testen-dis or upsetten-dis..I quench ya thirst like-sierra-mist... Im-tearen-dis..nex time wen u tryn hit personal get it right or prepare-a-list... |
This kids $ik of text, like a dried up pen...
Grabbed a ladder touched the rim... ..............................and he finally got a 'ten'... Moisturize his mess cause he's 'cummin' off dry... Well the sites $ik of you like blowing snot through two ply... This kids too lightweight, like a anorexic luncheon... I mean fuck, $ik can't even get his sig links to function... He's fucked, and he knows it if he thinks he's on the hunt... He's got it twisted, like pad to mouth and cig to cunt..... You beg door to door for praise, like a shy jehovahs witness... Face it!!! you don't have a hope of winning... ..................................like afgani woman in the olympics... |
Voted For: JPoll
JPoll got this but jus in my opinion i have seen better from both perhaps coz its only 10am and im still asleep to get my humour awake but structure wise J had it multies $ik punches J Personals J again Flow Jpoll rhymin was a tie both had nice usage of rhymes... Fav line You beg door to door for praise, like a shy jehovahs witness... Face it!!! you don't have a hope of winning... ..................................like afgani woman in the olympics... /\ hella hott closer that was good V/JPoll |
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Voted For: JPoll
your punches were harder hitting (althought some were whack)...you at least had personals and weren't talking about how whack the other person's were ($ik, dont complain about personals and not incorporate a single one in your verse)....and you had a better flow...$ik was tryin to hard to be complex and came up whck...decent multi's tho |
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Voted For: $ik
yo dis goes to sik, altho his struc was a lil off i took da time to read it n his punches hit directly n it all made snes en his flo was perfect, j poll yo dawg sumthin went rong dawg nun of yo sdhit was clikin wit me man so i have to say this goes to sik v/sik yall return da favors links r at da bottom, NO HATE!!! |
don't ever vote on my shit again...uppin...////////////
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Voted For: JPoll
sik: blah blah blah. <------thats all i saw in your verse, you used too many damn similies and ur punches was pretty damn weak, it seemed like the setup for the punch had a better punch than wat it was being set up for. i know you can do better than that, ive seen it.......4/10 jpoll: not all that impressed from all the word ive been hearin bout how dope you are but some of the punches were good and actually made me laugh. in case you didnt catch word yet.......were done with them "come" lines :thumbup:......7.5/10 v//jpoll RTF with HONEST votes.....links in mah sig |
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