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LIL'DREW 08-23-04 10:50 PM

da champions of rap
 
Da champ is here ready to mack hes back
wit no fear/ hit me baby like britney spears/
I dare you queers to come up here and blast
ya rhymes in deese ears/ ya flows is weard/
Lil' Drew here to bring ya to tears/ fresh off da
line wit a new engine and oiled gears/ I bring
you up to my level and smash you down so fast/
you'd think I was Rocky da way I knock you
on ya' ass/ we spittin' fire to bitches who hate/ ya
faker than fake/ at da top a my game shootin straghter than
straight/ I dont know its just a trait the way I spit
at this rate/ in a state/ of emergency when m.c.'s
is in a time of ergency/ my rhymes is perfect/ im
certain/ because I got deese dudes rockin' and da'
girls they be twurkin'/ and they all be on me like
Ms. Piggy on Kermit/ I get credit because you
probably read it/ I already said it/ bled it/ you fled it/
I write the illest shit ever and I make sure you
dread it/

lookin for feedback!!!

BlackMagik 08-23-04 10:54 PM

DAMN....that was fiya!!! wasnt expectin your new ass to drop sumthin like that!! LMAO...structure was hard to follow in some parts...but wutever its all good...nice shit keep droppin

LIL'DREW 08-23-04 11:04 PM

thanks cuz, glad you like my shit

LIL'DREW 08-24-04 03:00 PM

none
 
uppin' for feedback in dis bitch

LIL'DREW 08-24-04 04:20 PM

aight, thats kool

LIL'DREW 08-24-04 09:04 PM

ay yall', its hella people lookin but aint no one leavin nuthin'
c'mon yall'
leave some shit

LIL'DREW 08-24-04 11:23 PM

uppin fo' feedback

cmon' yall

EastCoast 11-01-04 08:40 PM

ay it was tight, but the structure was a little off. I give it a 7/10.

Denied Truth 11-01-04 08:47 PM

strait shit...

betta den alot of catz...

u gon be good...**note-11-01**
D.Truth sed it first yo!!

TRU STORY YO!!!

KEEP ELEVATIn
fix dat structure..it'll make it flow betta ya dig

hit up My Breathe Remix..in my siggy...

WuN

LIL'DREW 11-01-04 09:42 PM

dis shit is hella old...i wrote it like a year ago...damn...

BlackMagik 11-01-04 09:45 PM

lmao...drop some new shit dawg!!! you aint dropped in hellaz!

Chew187 11-02-04 02:24 AM

That was aiight;not great. You can do better than that :thumbup: 7/10 keep dr[]PPen :spit:

Loveliss Grandz 11-02-04 02:35 PM

real nice drop.8/10.u got skillz,keep em comin'


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