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da champions of rap
Da champ is here ready to mack hes back
wit no fear/ hit me baby like britney spears/ I dare you queers to come up here and blast ya rhymes in deese ears/ ya flows is weard/ Lil' Drew here to bring ya to tears/ fresh off da line wit a new engine and oiled gears/ I bring you up to my level and smash you down so fast/ you'd think I was Rocky da way I knock you on ya' ass/ we spittin' fire to bitches who hate/ ya faker than fake/ at da top a my game shootin straghter than straight/ I dont know its just a trait the way I spit at this rate/ in a state/ of emergency when m.c.'s is in a time of ergency/ my rhymes is perfect/ im certain/ because I got deese dudes rockin' and da' girls they be twurkin'/ and they all be on me like Ms. Piggy on Kermit/ I get credit because you probably read it/ I already said it/ bled it/ you fled it/ I write the illest shit ever and I make sure you dread it/ lookin for feedback!!! |
DAMN....that was fiya!!! wasnt expectin your new ass to drop sumthin like that!! LMAO...structure was hard to follow in some parts...but wutever its all good...nice shit keep droppin
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thanks cuz, glad you like my shit
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none
uppin' for feedback in dis bitch
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aight, thats kool
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ay yall', its hella people lookin but aint no one leavin nuthin'
c'mon yall' leave some shit |
uppin fo' feedback
cmon' yall |
ay it was tight, but the structure was a little off. I give it a 7/10.
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strait shit...
betta den alot of catz... u gon be good...**note-11-01** D.Truth sed it first yo!! TRU STORY YO!!! KEEP ELEVATIn fix dat structure..it'll make it flow betta ya dig hit up My Breathe Remix..in my siggy... WuN |
dis shit is hella old...i wrote it like a year ago...damn...
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lmao...drop some new shit dawg!!! you aint dropped in hellaz!
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That was aiight;not great. You can do better than that :thumbup: 7/10 keep dr[]PPen :spit:
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real nice drop.8/10.u got skillz,keep em comin'
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