NewKid vs ImWhiteUrDead
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 11:21 PM

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NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 11:23 PM.

ImWhiteUrDead has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 11:28 PM.

u jus a old man who need 2 stick wit flicks..(pornos)
u couldnt b freestlyeking if u lived wit flip..
i got shells that bust hell n leave u bleedin from ya knees 2 lips..

next time dont make a sn on a rap site..
cus most of theeze niggaz smoke ya flow like a crack pipe..
u shuld of stuck 2 doin tricks on half pipes..

chek ya location only u beat iz ya meat..
grab tha vasoline n tha towel and sit on tha toilet seat..

u culdnt b known if u was god's kid..
i drop tha stillmatic n ya grill like Nas did..

i cut ya body up in put it on a stick like a shishkabob..(meat on a stick)..then mail ya brains n a box 2 ya misses job..

i pull out tha machetee and rip ya face off..
u like 2 balls with a bat so jus stick 2 baseball..

who won this battle
 

uppin sum votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ com on yall...how do u get a K.O on here if some on dont show or sumthin else like that

Ok, whos' the "NewKid" runnin around and holdin his dick
Talkin shit like no one can touch him, it makes me sick
You thought i was a bitch and herb who couldn't even rap
Well guess what Kid, i came back with a bitch slap
This bitch talkin about a 5-0 like he gonna KO me
You couldn't KO me even if he was Obie facin Mobie
Think of he ruff times, i could "ruff ride" over you harder than Ruffridah
I'm comin right behind ya and you think you a tuff rhyma
I'm a tell you this, bitch and remember only this time around
After i've done beat you you'll be thinkin who's the bitch now

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

ok Whitey takes it cuz he had harder punches.....better wordplay and structure...just a baetter verse overall

NewKid....decent punches....notharder than Whiteys.....your structure was a little off and your wordplay.....ehhhhh.....ok......elevate.....both of you can

v/ImWhiteUrDead

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Voted For: NewKid

yo i give my vote to da new kid because his punchlines. his punchilines took this battle

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Voted For: NewKid

new kid took this by a lil bit...he edged you with better punches and personals...a couple multies, and had good flow...structure was a lil off but good...imwhiteuredead...u need to elevate more...add more creativity...ure opener was weak, and your closer was just getting stronger...so vote goes to newkid...was just over all better

Voted For: NewKid

Punches = NewKid
Vocab = New Kid
Multies = Non Existant
Metas = Maybe ImWhiteUrDead

Yo I'm SORRY But You IMWHITEURDEAD That Line About Mobie An Obie...It Reminded Me Of Eminem 'Without Me' ..Ya Know? ...''MOBY!....YOU CAN GET STOMPED BY OBIE!''...An I Hate That Song So........
.............NEWKID Got My VOTE....Sorry IMWHITEURDEAD, Good Lookin Tho, You Still Got Dope Rhymes

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

I think IM white has this..... his punches came harder and i liked his flow better.... new kid not bad.... but i didntr really like your structure....
Nice battle Jayme...

Brad~~

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Voted For: NewKid

new kid took this easy
better punches metas were good too
needs to work on flow and structure to make it easier to read
white.. ur verse was not potent enough, weak personals and punches, good flow and structure
weak metas too simple.
win to newkid...... no hate just honesty
BUT if u want to white we can battle next if u can handle it
pm me or matterfact ill set the thread u can accept or decline

Voted For: NewKid

Vote for NewKid.. Nice flow , good punches , some wordplay

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This was feedback posted for ImWhiteUrDead
 

close battle, but New wins. white you were good but New Kid wuz betyer. i liked the punches, flow, and personals wit new, structure wuz white. white your rhymes were kinda simple. "u culdnt b known if u was god's kid..
i drop tha stillmatic n ya grill like Nas did.." haha new. white one line i liked wuz "I'm a tell you this, bitch and remember only this time around
After i've done beat you you'll be thinkin who's the bitch now" really wuznt funny, but decent closer. peace

Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

you killed him that others guys rhymes just got real boring it put me to sleep ...your was short asnd sweet...lol but it was kinda even until your ending that last bar made the diff ......goddd ending nice personal just elevate a lil more....