Shotta Muh'Fuckin Boy Spittin Chrome From The Dome!
 

Dogg, All I Wanna Do Iz Chill With The Dead Prezidents//
You Best Call The F.B.I To Help You Out Cause You Got Murderd With No Evidence//
I Came In This Game Knowin I'm Gonna Suceed Cause I Got Slik Talkin n Street Intelligence//
Soon As I Picked Up The Mic I'm Seein DEAD PEOPLE Like Ah '6th Sense'//
Any Way Any Style, You Wanna Do Punches? Step In The Ring I'll Knock You Out Like Mike Tyson//
Lets Take It To The STREET I'll Fight-Ya Like M.Bison//
You Niggas Affraid Of 'THE GOD' So Ya Sleep With The Light-On//
Got A Lil Red Light On The Gat To Make Sure I Hit The Right-One//
I'm From The Hot Streets Of Orlando n Got Game On The Court Step Up n I'll Show You Magic//
Scream SHOTTA 3 Times n The Results Will Be TRAGIC//
Got J4P Rollin Wit' Me n We Spittin Thug Poetry/
We Gon' HUFF n We Gon' PUFF We Blowin Nigguhz DOWN//
Are ARSINAL's Bout Mo' Than Juss Lyrics So If The Words Dont Get Ya Your Gettin Hit With A Couple Rounds!
:shoot:

Blaaat Blaaaaat, J4P Where My Nigguhz At??
We Doin It Big Mayn, Somebody Better Holla!

Fixed The Structure As I'ma Do On EVERY Rhyme I Posted

Aight Aight Look Mayne Fix Da Struture Though Mayne Its Wack Its Hardly I Cant Even Read It But U Got Good Flow But Fix Da Struture Mayne

~peace~

Aight Check It Now n Tell Me If Datz Better Structure

shotta you got some good rhymes out... i like em all keep it up...

Aight Thanx Dogg, I Appreciate It, I Dropped Some Shit About Pac, Its Kinda Wack Rhymes But It Has Meanin, Check It Out n Gimme Some Feedback Homeboy

An Yo....Holla @ Me With Some Of Your Rhymes Dogg
Good Lookin
!!1!!

gd shit shotta

Any Way Any Style, You Wanna Do Punches? Step In The Ring I'll Knock You Out Like Mike Tyson//
Lets Take It To The STREET I'll Fight-Ya Like M.Bison//

dis line wuz dope i like it but i needed dis post to vote ur battle wit EPEDEMIK but dis sheit wuz dope ima holla at cha latter tho

Likkle Shotta yuh nice no rass. My only advice is try to limit the "nigguhz" (though I see you didn't at all overdose off it at all) and the cursewords even in your thread titles; it can drown away the expectations of the audience and hide all that artistic potential/fyah you have going there.

Aye Thanx 4 The Tip Shorty, Theres One roblem Tho'.....I Was Raized In A Broken Home n Cuss'n Is Juss Sumthin I Feel I HAVE To Do, ButThanx 4 The Propps Ya'll, Much Respect n Keep Doin Ya Thang
Good Lookin
!!1!!