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BlackMagik 08-24-04 05:56 PM

"A Love Story" [Hot Shit][rate]
 
"A Love Story"



well it started, a while back, was on the phone with my woman/
and we was goin thru some issues, now I felt her anger coming/
words exchanged without thought,our feelings held no regrets/
she said it was over, and that she never wanted to see me again/
so with anger, I grabbed a gun,then hung up the phone and left/
I couldn't believe the woman that I loved had me contemplating death/
I started down the steps, the pistol gripped tightly between my fingers/
"yo this bitch left me, man...I cant FUCKING BELIEVE THIS!!!/
got in the car, revin the engine with the stereo loud/
confused as fuck, my head feels like a merry-go-round/
tryin' to remain calm, but cant, my heart was now black as coal/
my ass was alone, cold, and with nowhere to go/
I felt so different, because I knew I was by myself/
drivin' solo thinking, "I wonder what it's like in hell?"/
my eyes started to swell, I just couldn't hold back the tears/
I could'nt believe that I had just wasted 'bout three years/



the next morning arrived, still mad, ready to die/
pulled the car over to the side, sighed, layed down and cryed/
thought about our past together, the nasty weather, and our future/
and now I feel like a loser, because I fucked up enough to lose her/
I sat wondering, if she was feeling the same pain as me/
but its plain to see, that love is more than a game to me/
I must be insane, to have put her thru all of that pain and strife/
damn man, I've made the biggest damn mistake of my life/
I took her for granite, took advantage, and then was abandoned/
damnit, I was stupid to lose something that I truly loved and cherished/
we had a future ahead of us, to get married, and start a family's life/
I always swore to her that with me, shit was guarenteed right/
but now hope is lost, I cant go crawling back/
cuz I'd fall back on my back, then come crawling right back/
I feel I just might crack, I'm trapped, I'll never be free/
I've got nuthin left in this world, cuz that gurl, was everything/

BlackMagik 08-24-04 06:15 PM

yo come on people!!! uppin for feed back on this bitch!!!!

Ms.Skillz4daze 08-24-04 06:21 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by BlackMagik
yo come on people!!! uppin for feed back on this bitch!!!!

LOL
Dang, y'all SERIOUS 'bout people respondin' to y'alls stuff on here, huh? This' like the 5th thread I done' seen where the poster was like,"MAW EFFA, RESPOND TO MY MUTHA F'N THREAD. BREAK YOSELF, FOOLLLLL!" lol

But anyway, I read your thread before you upped it and found it to be quite expressive. You do give off a psychotic-like vibe though and it started with:
Quote:
"yo this bitch left me, man...I cant FUCKING BELIEVE THIS!!!
and continued with:
Quote:
yo come on people!!! uppin for feed back on this bitch!!!!
:p

BlackMagik 08-24-04 08:11 PM

lmao...thanx gurl...still uppin for more feedback on this motherfucka!!!!!!!!!!!

YuNg_GuN 08-24-04 08:15 PM

nice

LIL'DREW 08-24-04 08:34 PM

none
 
tite shit dogg, im glad i know u in person

rep da STL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thumbup:

BlackMagik 08-24-04 09:09 PM

lmao....uppin...stay reppin that 314 playa

LIL'DREW 08-25-04 08:04 PM

hell yeah!!!!

-314- fo life
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