daking vs String9487
 

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daking has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:10 PM.

Im str8 all cash like banks/ I a have u droppin in da gutta like pin at da bowlin rink/ I put u 6ft deep where ya casket go/ pull ya azz from da ranks like i pull my doe/ put dis beef in a bag like chop meat/ dump ya body in da river like dawsons creek/ im way ya rank cuz im walkin tall/ ia cut u open haveu stitched up like chucky da doll/ I aint em but ia have u impatiently waitin/ ia stab u in ya face more dan freddy did jason/2 u man im trouble and i aint talkin bout da board game/ i a leave ya azz freezin like a cold tray of ice chains/ ya lyrics get flushed like a toilet cuz im shittin on u/ treat u like a diaper have my little son pissin on u/

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:31 PM.

[QUOTE=daking]Im str8 all cash like banks/ I a have u droppin in da gutta like pin at da bowlin rink/ I put u 6ft deep where ya casket go/ pull ya azz from da ranks like i pull my doe/ put dis beef in a bag like chop meat/ dump ya body in da river like dawsons creek/ im way above ya rank cuz im walkin tall/ ia cut u open haveu stitched up like chucky da doll/ I aint em but ia have u impatiently waitin/ ia stab u in ya face more dan freddy did jason/2 u man im trouble and i aint talkin bout da board game/ i a leave ya azz freezin like a cold tray of ice chains/ ya lyrics get flushed like a toilet cuz im shittin on u/ treat u like a diaper have my little son pissin on u/ i start shootin at ya feet den im given a lift/ have u doin da crip walk like u down wit da crips/ after dis u be burnin like a swore throat/ im sittin down makin lyrics while u writin notes/ 2 me u soft like buns and u wheat like bread/ i got da game and dis battle str8 locked like dreads/

i can't give u props, cuz i dont support lessers
did nigga aint "daking' look more like the court jester
eh yo dis nigga need to fall back
i'll snap, ya skull cracked, swollen head in ya balll cap
u can get merked if u show up fine
its like i regurgitate raps teh way i "throw up" rhymes
i'll load the pump, when i dump u bleed
ya whole head will crack open like pumpkin seeds
u can't rap , dont flow please stop
my "punches" r haymakers n urs is cheap shots
i'll make u dissappear wit a mask n some gloves
dis lil upstart must b askin for slugs
Ima end this right now, u shoulnta have started fam
only place u need ot '"drop" is in the garbage can
ima read my own raps hopefully i'll b less board
only time u b "daking" is on chessboards
dog ya flow fell thru
u aint gangsta, the only thing on ya waiste is ya belt loops
cuz u so wack, people gon b sleepin wats worse
ya structure so fucked i didnt bother readin ya verse
u just a lightweight, fall back iima toss this man
make the "daking" FOLD cuz he done loss this hand HAAAAAA

uppin for votes holla at me

Voted For: String9487

Damn...Obviously String takes this. Much better structure than kings first of all. Better punches in his verse. He came harder than he had too. Chess borads line was sick. Kings verse was all over the place. Couldnt follow it that well. Also the closure was bullshit. Bad verse. Elevate. String takes this easy with harder punches and an overall better verse.

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Voted For: String9487

Obvously you took this string..

structure - string
punches - string
personals - string
vocab - string
multies - string

overall - you had a way better verse string more entertaining and the punches were simple but hit hard, your rhymes were on poinmt also.. daking needs to work on the structure really bad and needs to elevate, so vote = string

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Voted For: String9487

string you get this
"ya structure so fucked i didnt bother readin ya verse"
don't know why but i liked it...
your pumpkin seed line was aight too
you came with clean structure and decent flow some nice punches

Daking you had a messed up structure everything all together like that makes it choppy tah flow but that dawsons creek line was aight but some of your lyrics a sortah play'd
some punches but they were hit and miss

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Voted For: String9487

give it 2 String his wordplay was ill
so his punches hit hard Daking yo shit was tight
but String also had sum metas dat were better
dan urs so i gave it 2 him vote on my battles in
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Voted For: String9487


Im str8 all cash like banks/ I a have u droppin in da gutta like pin at da bowlin rink/ I put u 6ft deep where ya casket go/ pull ya azz from da ranks like i pull my doe/ put dis beef in a bag like chop meat/ dump ya body in da river like dawsons creek/ im way ya rank cuz im walkin tall/ ia cut u open haveu stitched up like chucky da doll/ I aint em but ia have u impatiently waitin/ ia stab u in ya face more dan freddy did jason/2 u man im trouble and i aint talkin bout da board game/ i a leave ya azz freezin like a cold tray of ice chains/ ya lyrics get flushed like a toilet cuz im shittin on u/ treat u like a diaper have my little son pissin on u/


Punches were ok and ya wordplay could have been better but it was hard 2 follow ya flow cuz ya strucuter was fucked u cant come wit a drop in that kinda format cuz u will lose everytime


i can't give u props, cuz i dont support lessers
did nigga aint "daking' look more like the court jester
eh yo dis nigga need to fall back
i'll snap, ya skull cracked, swollen head in ya balll cap
u can get merked if u show up fine
its like i regurgitate raps teh way i "throw up" rhymes
i'll load the pump, when i dump u bleed
ya whole head will crack open like pumpkin seeds
u can't rap , dont flow please stop
my "punches" r haymakers n urs is cheap shots
i'll make u dissappear wit a mask n some gloves
dis lil upstart must b askin for slugs
Ima end this right now, u shoulnta have started fam
only place u need ot '"drop" is in the garbage can
ima read my own raps hopefully i'll b less board
only time u b "daking" is on chessboards
dog ya flow fell thru
u aint gangsta, the only thing on ya waiste is ya belt loops
cuz u so wack, people gon b sleepin wats worse
ya structure so fucked i didnt bother readin ya verse
u just a lightweight, fall back iima toss this man
make the "daking" FOLD cuz he done loss this hand HAAAAAA


Ya punches were a lil played but they still got the whole punch scenario u was tryin 2 get across ya wordplay could of been a lil better but u still had good chose of vocab complexity was a lil iffy but other than that it was a good job nice structure and flow that boosts it time's a 100