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Milk-E-Wae 08-24-04 09:40 PM

Milk-E-Wae vs ChristsideSoulja
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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System 08-24-04 09:41 PM

ChristsideSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 09:41 PM.

ChristsideSoulja 08-24-04 09:52 PM

you lossin it//fr3misoul//i let you go//and now your cold//you wanna battle with me//you crazy//thinking to rip with the//thinkin to battle with someone whos got more power then the J-C//can make you see things//make you see G-O-D//listen to p//im outtin you in casts//faster//but not as fast asi fuck your mother//you under//the thunder//lightning//you a fag for wantting to fight me//im more black then white see//i rip these lyrics//quicker then you can say freez//

System 08-24-04 10:01 PM

Milk-E-Wae has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 10:01 PM.

Milk-E-Wae 08-24-04 10:16 PM

u like trick-or-treaters, u keep getti boo'ed/(like ghosts)
y u even battle me, ur just gonna lose/
when i spit this demented shit, u aint even safe in prison bitch/
when i spit this lyrical wickedness/u disappear like somebody on a business trip/and u whishin this/beatin will soon b done/
trust me its almost over, cuz i've already won/

Milk-E-Wae 08-28-04 03:34 PM

.................... uppin for votes..............................

Dirty Nigga 08-28-04 07:17 PM

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

Milk E Has My Vote

Better Structure n Better Wordplay
Couldda Used More Humoress Punches, But Ya Still Got My Vote

Only Flaw Is You Need To Elevate On Ya Vocab

Christ, Ya Structure Is All Fucked Up, I Used To Have The Same Problem Man, Ya Flow Would Be Nice If You Prezented It Better...
Good Lookin Ya'll

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles

Status 08-28-04 07:32 PM

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

milk: you was aight you just need to work on your structure...your personals were real weak but they were coo for someone at your level...just work on oyur meta4s and your structure and your personals..everyone likes a good personal...6/10

cris: you had real bad structure....you need to worlk on that first...then work on oyur personals..becuz everyone loves a good personal......and then work on your punches then meta4s ...once you master those then you will be real good...4/10

vote=milk

Milk-E-Wae 09-01-04 06:25 PM

.... uppin for votes. ...

Tanto 09-02-04 04:15 PM

This was feedback posted for ChristsideSoulja
 
not enough punches from the both of yous
i dont get your flow christsidesoulja it loses me
step it up a lil bit more too rookie-ish

Barburyin 09-02-04 05:00 PM

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

u iight get sum betta vocab n make punchlines a lil betta n ya flow needs sum work but ya def beat that otha nigga
vote=milk

Milk-E-Wae 09-03-04 07:13 PM

ok, close this 1 already ...

50Cal. 09-03-04 07:39 PM

Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

ok neither had good punches disses or vocab yall both need to elevate i have nothing to judge but flow and structure and milk has that hands down chirts shit is way off

NewKid 09-04-04 12:40 AM

This was feedback posted for ChristsideSoulja
 
Wat Tha Hell Was U Thinkin Bout Makin That Shitty Ass Verse

Tila_sixx 09-04-04 10:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Milk-E-Wae
 
dat was hot milk-e-way yo had better everything then again this is just feedback


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