Tuff Life Freestyle
 

Yeh this is a freestyle to all ma brothers that been dissed cuz they are black.

so wut the fuck is goin on in this country
niggas on streets all bein treated like dirty loundry
aight we used to bein pulled over cuz we all black
but since when do we also get beat down for dat
we got enouf trouble wit da war, brothers bein shiped every day
but now when we see white cops, we gotta find detour way
cuz they all disrespect a brother cuz they kids actin like us
just cuz they kids dress all black, nobody likes us
and since when a broither is a threat to society, DAMN
they tryed to ruin our culture, and WE should give back to THEM?
and why the fuck we the ones livin in crappiest neighbourhoods
and we are the ones needin charity clothes and foods
they close most the ways to society, and den blaim us for sellin dope
so if u take dat a way might just give most of us a sope and a rope
ya think we all athlets and shit, no son you wrong
ya think all dem rappers can make it, shit keep singin that song
yeah lets face it, yall dont wanna see a black man make it
if u see some "punks" who do, u come and u try and take it
well aint that the truth i aint takin this shit no more
i think its time for all brothers to settle the score

and yeah heres da link where i feedback
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144989

yo man i read the whole thing wack drop man wackest shit ever and ever...
naw im just playin wit ya dope drop 9/10 flow good wordplay good

Thnx man, main thing is dat u felt da theme, UPPIN

uppin

^^^^^ uppin

hey commonppl need tha feed back ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

nice man good drop...

thnx man Uppin

more feed is needed common uppin

that was hott. even though im white, i still think it was hot. props.

aight, thanks uppin some more, yall gotta feel this in my opinion cuz this is relavant

yo nice drop enough said peace i like it man 6/10

ya nice spit man

7/10 man yer dope but not the best ive seen peace

o sry about this but ya you need soem vocab tho thats all man