nucleuss vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 06:21 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed for freeposting for votes

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 06:22 AM.

(4 People Havin Trouble With The Structure Of My Rhymes, The Words In CAPS Are The Ones That Rhyme An /// < Ends The Line An Goes OnTo The Next One)

Dogg I'm The NUCLEUS Of This Rap Game An Your In Too Deep
An Runnin Scared Cause Ya Brand NEW-TO-THIS///
I'm Bout To Do You A Favor n Hand You A Gun....This Is A Once In A Lifetime Oppertunity So Boy DONT-MISS///
You Prolly Wonderin Why Ya Own Momma Wont Give You A KISS///
Its Prolly Cause Of The Bullshit That Comes Out Your MOUTH!
Muh'Fucka U Dont Want It With The Boy From The SOUTH!
Muh'Fucka I'll Run Up In Yo' HOUSE
I Want Yo' Money n Ya LIFE
I'm Demandin Sex Wit' Yo' WIFE
I'ma Forceful Nigguh So You Know I'ma Get It Cause ''I Got Myself....'' A KNIFE...
If You Want My ADVICE...I'd Get The Fuck Outta Here Before I CHOKE-YOU
Wrap The MIC Wire Round Ya Throat n Its OVER I juss SHOWED-YA How To MURDER Ah Mutha'Fucka Cause This How The Dirty FOLK-DO!!

Uppppppppppp For Votes On This Battle N The Rest Of My Battles Ya'll, I'll Return The Favor

nucleuss has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 08:09 AM.

listern up bitch uda only thing u shot is ur mother
familys real fucked comittin incest wit ur bruver shouldve stayed undercover
coz ull b left in a hospitalbed needin time 2 recover
i am like no other
im in a whole new league
puttin shotta kidz toy under seige
shoot out both lungz so u cant breathe
on ur back gettin blessed by a priest
ill even send a reef father
im makin this mc a martyre
no hopes or dreamz i bet u becume my gardener
u hard enough
im rippin out theses handcuffs
ur askin hosts please do it up my butt
throat left cutt
slice ur stomach and watch ur organz fall out ur gutt

b

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 GOD DAMN VOTES YA'LL!!!!!!

Vote This Battle Ya'll, Its Not Gon' Fuckin Kill You To Vote Is It

Hey YO!!!!!
Upppppppppppp THE DAMN VOTES!!

Vote On ANY Of MY Battles n I'll Return The FAVOR With HONEST Well Explained VOTES

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

:shocked: wack battle yo....but i think shottaboy gets this...cos at my opinion he had better punches and personals..peeps say my structure is wachydy wack..but mayne u both got me on this asin u both r worse...structure is how u place ur lines in a way the reader can fell the flow too....digs?...o well shottaboy had this just for better punches.......

hook minez up

holla :thumbup:

Voted For: nucleuss

Wow dis one's a good battle both had sum nice lyrics ima ..... go wit nucleuss he had sum good pl's they hit hard da over all structure wuz good i got da meledoly pretty easy

sHoTTaBoY i saw ur past battles u had sum good sheit i guess dat new style of usin no pl's its not working i kinda see da direction ur trying to go wit tho if u got it down it wud sound koo

APPRECIATED!! Thanx CHAM, I Like When People Find The Flaws So I Know What To Work On, Proppz My Nigguh, Thanx For The HONESTY
You's A REAL Kat, If You Ever Wanna Do A Callabo Or Ya Need A Crew, Holla @ Me In Pm Kid
Thanx For The VOTES, Keep Em Comin'