upfront vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 0

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:03 PM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 02:04 PM.

damn 2,000 degrees of metal in ya skin/
now yo ass start cryin cuz u a "bitch" and ya bleedin/
like shut the fuck up go get a napkin/
now u start askin/

like who did it wen and y?/
stop bitchin u puss u lucky uaint die/

like granted for life took, put that shit in reverse/
like a car blazin da hill puttin ya ass in a hearst/

see ya lost ya life in a flash/
ta me ya body jus a peice of trash/
while ya family can only remanisce to da past/
and all ya photos been stashed/
cuz the pains to great to think u died in a crash/
if u werent dead i wouldve pulled the trigga and blast/

y0o steal from da rich and give to da poor/
im "robbin ya hood" then takin ya 4 door/

they call u lady fiya but u ugly as shit/
jsu stop rappin on dis sita and give ya momz a kiss/
even though shes a slut she sucks a mean dick/
i betta call er up soon and hit that shit/
who knows i could b ya pops kid////////(damn)

~peace~

[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:21 AM.

*this sum bullshit on the line limit, it's supposed to be 16 so.. posts to vote is 0 and time limit 15 minutes*

nigga suck like last night’s vacuum session gettin ya “head stuck”..
got luck? ya watch votes pass, best thing u type for me is “up”
front lines serve you best cuz everyone seems to merk you (lmao)
record mo’ beat, than a teen caught 4 hours over tha curfew
“groundin’ you”, this gangsta pop pills, to “filler” a “magnum”
can’t lift Trojans, ya “head mo’ pissed” than kids w/ tantrums (lol)
matches unhandled, can’t drop “flamez” if u “lit ya spit on fire”
ya lyrics are “roadkill”, they get “ran over” ya scars get admired!
rhymes so “tired”, we “skip over ya tracks” re-windin flashbacks>
fans clap cuz “curtains are pulled” when Fiya bitch-slaps ya “act”!
“deep-fried” ya outer-limits frontal imaged as “spicy pork skins”!!>
treat 4 ex-Muslims, “post vote” on ya screen never got pushed in! (6 loses)

*u got sum fucked up rules but i still merked ya ass..*
~Lady Fiya~

w.t.f. u do to the rules..? upfront.. anywayz, uppin' this sum serious bullshit.. but yea, good luck.. lol.. uppin'.. lol

this shit isnt letting me vote.Ill post my vote here then but it wonc be counted:

Dayum this wasnt even a real battle in my opinion,upfront had a wack verse and Lady Fiya turned it uppa notch and merled him.
Upfront,u need to learn how to have personals and wordplay man.Every single line of urs was very wack and basic.Get a new structure also because it is quite fucked up.The only ok thing in Ur erse was,well,nothing.Ur punches need to get stronger too,so go to Tutorials,read it through,and battle for elevation.
Lady Fiya,your verse wasnt as good as sum other ones I've read,examples vs. Empire or One man band or that diss vs. Latinkitten,but Ur punches hit quite hard,Ur structure was a bit off,Ur flow was kinda rough at points,but Ur personals and punches won this for U.Congrats.

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Whoa!!!!!!...
I knew she was good but....DAMN!!!!!

up front...no hate... no lies... ya shyt sucked in comparison to fiya. This is prolly the 2nd worst merking I've seen since I've been on this site.

Fiya:
structure:9/10
personals: 7/10... killed you about ya record
punches: 8/10
metas: 8/10
multi's: n/a (except for the 5th bar... prety good!)
vocab: 7/10

Upfront:

structure: 3/10
punches:3/10
personals: 2/10
metas: ...none 0/10
multi's: none 0/10
vocab:3/10

too easy for fiya... yo Fiya... whenever ya wanna do a collabo hit me up...even though ya beat my gurl Manip..lol

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^yep.. well uppin' this shit..
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Lady Fiya

Voted For: upfront

came harder...betta punches and shit...gave it to front

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady fiya won this battle hands down she had betta personals and punches and wordplay she killed upfront son u need to elavate a lil ya verse was choppy had weak punches and multis wasnt there. so lady took it.

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

uhm this one is gonna go toooooooo...lady fiya man she just had better flow and rhytm her hits were a bit harder but overall i think both yahs need to come a bit harder but good job return the fav vote sindicate-sexychick1338 on the front lines

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y0o mayne thanks fa da vote buh y0o im in B A M i dont think u knew dat cuz ur rosta dont have me on it

uppin' close this peoples..
~wun~
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady's stucture for 1 was dope and her punches ight:
opener:5/10
closener:7/10
punches:6/10
metas:8/10
multi's9/10
the other cat:
sucked easy he had all his punches and multi's metas and all that was lower then 4/10 lol
return the favour in my battle vs mookie in my sig thanks peace