MaNiPuLaTiOn vs grand skeme
 

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Check in by: 08-25-04 at 04:45 PM

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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 04:15 PM.

Another herb newb..mite as well carry a "wackness banner"..
u couldnt knock your style "clean"..usin the "arm n hammer"..
foot in ya mouth,and this is da-feet that you clearly smelt..
u survived the crash...but ur style wasnt wearin a "seat-belt"
ima play u off the field,as if u woz osamas military tactics..
your style harder to figure out...than "amatuer dramatics"..
i dnt hve to cum dope,n u running like romeo on the elope...
only reason u still afloat is coz no "sides_split" wen u joke...


ha woteva....wot u got?

Grand Skeme has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 04:44 PM.

yeah would'nt a bitch name her self MANipulation-
tits adjacent to ya PUSSY could'nt make me do it all for the NOOKIE-
I'll go "in too deep" like "In Too Deep"-
play ya position like the Kamasutra Hindu freak-
plus I killed ya daddy, youz a bastard, Im a savage-
Bitch! you can't "hold me" like Big Punishers casket-
Bitch! get ya ass kicked from every angle-
Grand Skeme's the "MAN"...baby youz an angel-

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

manipulation won hands down. better punches, better flow, and better structure. "Another herb newb..mite as well carry a "wackness banner"..
u couldnt knock your style "clean"..usin the "arm n hammer".." haha thats nice. grand u just screwed up. "I'll go "in too deep" like "In Too Deep"-" we arent stupid dude. wed get the punch. peace

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Mani gets my vote just one of her
metas took out Grand's whole verse
didn't even have 2 read da rest of ya verse
Grand no hate but u need more work u metas
but dey didn't hit 2 hard but u could be good
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Not The Strongest Battle In The World....
No Real Hard Hittin Punches, The Structure Was Good On Both Verses, No Multies Tho, Metas Could Have Been Better
Nice Usage Of Words By Manipulation

Grand Skeme Never Really Hit Hard Enuff In My Opinnon, The Flow Was Okat But Manipulation Look Liked Thery Put More Effort n Used There Words A Hell Of A Lot Better..

Both Need 2 Elevate. Nice Verses Tho..


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This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

got'em damn you really fuked his world up... sorry homie... my vote is for manipulation

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

damn yo she killed it tha rhymes was tight tha flow was killin it the vocab was nice n tha punchlines was real tight

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

wack ass battle and this was very much one sided battle
grand: not very much of yours rhymed, your was weak as fuck too basic and no punches suck ass personals noting good even ya strucutre and flow was messed

Manipul: you made it look good nice verse overall nice punches and good personald ya had good flowing shit and nicve strucutre and ya verse made me laugh a lil

Vote: manipulation

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Mani won diss one wordplay was ill
which made da punches tight had an overall
good verse

Grand u tryed 2 have punches but dey didn't hit
u worded it wrongkeep workin on it
ur structure n flo was koo but ur verse was basic
so use more wordplay nvocab n metas u'll be good

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