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Black Dragon 08-25-04 06:36 PM

Juss so sick
 
in my opinion one of my best drops.....but that's juss me........

here's da link:

Fo DSL and UP:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1544864&q=Hi

Fo Dial UP:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1544864&q=Lo

um here's da link to my Soundclick:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/qckillahzmusic.htm

If all that doesn't work i guess u weren't meant to hear the song LOL nah but seriously.......check it out........

Jae Battles 08-25-04 08:31 PM

aiight listenin...good beat selection...you kind of fallin off your flow a lil dog...its like you readin from your notebook which is not good...but you get the idea the way you spittin it its juss fallin off alil and you should pic it back up...but all around pretty coo drop

fluidmoon 08-25-04 09:14 PM

not bad, i liked the beat, you should try to spit louder,maybe work on ya flow a bit too, but overall it was decent........keep it up1

Black Dragon 08-26-04 03:01 PM

yo man 'preciate da feedback..........uppin.........

[.:D:.] 08-27-04 01:12 AM

your gettin a lil betta man..........more tips

you have to really be in touch wit the beat.......this beat is kinda slow i guess......so instead of pausin in every line write more lyrics....cuz pausin just makes everybody sound dumb to me....i told u before u gotta make ya shit sound betta....if u mess up dont just go pass it.do it agin and again til you get everything perfect...i heard u mess up on ya first line......you didnt say scream u said....scweem...work on dat yo....and get ya wordplay up ya shit is still simple....work on that stuff man....and somethin else.....when we come into the thread....we kno ya name stop sayin ya name all the time...like in the battle i had wit u...you said ya name like every other line man stop doin that..so no hate again just givin u tips

Black Dragon 08-27-04 03:30 PM

yo man really 'preciate da feedback...........aiite then

pz

~1~


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