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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-25-04 08:13 PM

"Your Honey's" post feedback dope topicial. cuz i made my won topicial lol
 
Tryin to hurt me wit a twig what you thinkin im a pig/
Yer jealous because my dicks big and also because I can jig/.
Wit all yer honeys up in the club and then I take them home & then were slow in the tub/
Then we get a little rubin and then I give it back with a little more scrubin/.
I do it with ease not with just only rhythm but a little more breeze/
Thos gurls wit me aint even afraid to drop on there knees/.
And take me to lovers lane they aint here for my money so they sneeze/
Becuz im makin them cry its so big they also freeze/.
Now I aint afraid to ask for a number/
After this they will leave cuz they left me for a slumber/.

Next I roll out wit some more hoes and they better match my clothes/
I picked them up at some shows, theres 2 not afraid to pose/.
Now these 2 realy its true aint afraid to mate wit me/
They also said not to cheat on them I said gurls I agree/.
I loved the one so I gave her a long pretty red flower/
Now it died cuz she didn’t love me back, she had no power/.
I was stupid to think I could chill another day with her/
She just wanted my money, so she could buy herself some nice fur/.
My respect for the female race grows shorter/
Now that its hard to produce and drop the quarter/.

If I ever find another I will try to keep her in my heart/
Not in my brain to think shes hot, cuz that would not be a start/.
But it was hard not to keep her from my brain she was a fine piece of art/
To much to notice I couldent keep track, shes 1st on my chart/.
It was great are 2nd night out it was all about maken love/
Me and her but this time I tried not to shove/.
She was amazed I took the love right to the door step/
But she thought I was like a big time school prep/.
I took her down the foot step and told her im realy just hip/
And then after that I also told her not to give me lip/.
Now we got into a fight don’t kno what to do with my boo/
Probly just tell her to leave but anyway she reminded me of a jew/.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-25-04 08:31 PM

Uppin come on

G_$peed 08-25-04 09:26 PM

nice man

BlackMagik 08-26-04 12:19 AM

to be honest i really wasnt feelin this...I've seen much better from u man so it was a lil less then I expected

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-26-04 01:22 AM

ok thanks but ya ruff you need some real feedback or ill report you cuz you do it in battles to


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