big_boy vs realistik
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

the topical is ur life in prision so good luck. :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 07:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

big_boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 07:14 AM.

yo I walk through this prision LIFE//
for whoopin my bitchass WIFE//
every day iam raped in the SHOWER//
cuz all the guys call me their special FLOWER//
so before i go to sleep i pray for the LORD//
to take away my pain cuz my ass is SORE//
so before u think about hittin on ur wife //
you might want to trun bi//

REALISTIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:05 AM.

im trapped in a 4 by 4 cell..with a door way to hell...
i open it up..im hoping the cup is there full of water..
i miss holding and having my daughter...
i dont but oughta fear..unsure how long ill remain here..
i can plainly hear ..the screams of the night dreams..
have you ever heard a gangster commiting murder??..
saftey is what i thought i would get...
now i stay confined and regret ever doing that crime...
but i gotta forget ..and let it go..i remain upset i no..
in a way i deserve this..it my life i gotta preserve this..
i remain nervous on what the next day will bring...
another fight?..or they might not turn out the light..
to watch us sleep..i stay strong i dont cry.....
im scared ..i wont lie..but i gotta get by...
for another 30 years..im forced to mix with my dirty peers..
havent felt this much hurt in years...
you start to loose certain cares...
drug dealers, murderous villians..
some people shouldnt even be here..they just fill in's
but i guess i will last..as long as i can 4get the past...

pz

Voted For: REALISTIK

WtF y tha hell would yall make a topic about life n jail....but u get mah vote better flow tha otha dude"everi day im raped n tha shower" haha he need 2 chek that out but u get mah vote

Voted For: REALISTIK

Okay, This Wasnt Even Close....
REALISTIK Murderd That Kat
Better Structure, More Punches, Better Wordplay n He Hit Harder...Put More Effort InTo His Verse

big boy Ya Verse Wasnt Really Anythin, U Need 2 Step Ya Game Up n Use Better Punches n Broaden Your Vocabulary...

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles Ya'll

P E A C E

alright everyone we are still open for the votes and give me some feed back becuase I want to elevate peace.

Voted For: REALISTIK

I HAVE TO GO WITH REALISTIK HE HAD CREACTIVE// IT FELT LIKE HE WAS THERE NICE MAYNE/

BIG BOY U WAS GOOD BUT IT WASNT MUCH CREATIVITY IN YO VERSE KEEP AT IT MAYNE

REAL KEEP DOING YO THANG BIG PROPS TO BOTH OF YALL

~PEACE~

RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN DA SIG MAYNE

Voted For: REALISTIK

(BigBoy)
every day iam raped in the SHOWER//
<Nastiest line I have ever seen...GROSS......
(REAL)
havent felt this much hurt in years...
you start to loose certain cares...
<deep shit man keep elevatin

LMAO FACTOR: none
Multi:Real
Vote :Real

Ok we can see who is wining this one so come on folks and close it off but give and honest vote.

This was feedback posted for big_boy
 

ehh second guy needs to extend his raps more put in some punches

Voted For: big_boy

realistik got dis one big boy didnt even come at em no personals nuthin wtf go to open mic if u wanna rap off y0o head no hate

vote =realistik

nah realistik wtf ...........................................

Voted For: REALISTIK

more wordplay better verse and better flow structure punches everything...
big_boy you are wack... need more wordplay...