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Dirty Nigga 08-26-04 10:35 AM

sHoTTaBoY vs System Crasher
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 10:35 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

DQ.. freeposting for votes

System 08-26-04 10:35 AM

System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:35 AM.

System 08-26-04 10:35 AM

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:35 AM.

System Crasher 08-26-04 10:41 AM

System Crasher, Shottaboy Slasher,
You lyrical abuser, Rhymes clasher,
I spitt on you to win alot faster,
Can't spitt on me, I'm emcee master,
I will trample you like a train, Chu Chu!
Oh and rappings not about rhyming in Tutu's,
You should prepare to lose pretty quick,
You couldn't win this with yo mom on ya dick!
The reason I left two lines behind, when I was strokin,
Was so, you could explain to these emcees why your chokin!

Peace out!~~~

Dirty Nigga 08-26-04 10:43 AM

Aight You Bout To Witness A 'rise & Fall' In Juss One VERSE../
I'm The Gift This Here Bitch Is Bout To Get CURSED../
I Can Achieve More In One Punchline Than This Fool Can Achieve In A CONCERT../
I'm Stompin The Shit Out You An Only Thing You See Is The Soul Of My CONVERSE../
I'm Like An 'ATM' In The Way I Make This System DISPURSE../

I'm Runnin Lyrical Rings Round This Kat n He Lookin A Lil Tubby So How Da Fuck You Expect To Catch Me SON?../
Man, I'm Married To My GUN../
So B4 You Go n Akt Up You Must Always Remeber TWO IS BETTER THAN ONE!!../

Dirty Nigga 08-26-04 10:49 AM

Nice Rhymin' System, Propps Dogg! Much Respect
Uppppppppppppppppp'n 4 Votes Ya'll!!!

Dirty Nigga 08-26-04 11:05 AM

This Battles Sumthan EPIC, Vote On This Rite Here n I'll Return The Favor With An HONEST An WELL EXPLAINED Vote

plustwo 08-26-04 11:22 AM

Voted For: System Crasher

you took this yours flowed well and it had some pretty funny lines in it,

shotta your rhymes were a lil bit streched other than that good battle

chamorropit 08-26-04 11:24 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I Can Achieve More In One Punchline Than This Fool Can Achieve In A CONCERT../
I'm Stompin The Shit Out You An Only Thing You See Is The Soul Of My CONVERSE../

OoO wee dis line wuz sic sHoTTaBoY took dis one his structure is good easy to read his wordplay flowed nice

System Crasher u started off kinda slow wit no pl's but ur last line hit hard but sHoTTaBoY jus wuz more consient wit his flow but u got lyrics tho

Dirty Nigga 08-26-04 11:29 AM

Appreciate the Honesty n Votes Ya'll, Even Tho PLUSTWO Didnt Explain His Vote I Appreciate The Vote.....
CHAM Good Lookin My Nigguh

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPP'n 4 More VOTES!!

plustwo 08-26-04 11:40 AM

asight ill explain it now, i liked systems more cos it had funnier punches and shorter lines i thought your lines were a bit over streched but it was still a good verse...

overall in my opinion system came stronger with his punches.

there that betta?

System Crasher 08-26-04 11:41 AM

Yeah... Respected dog!.... shotta you were pretty good!

Uppin for votes!

System Crasher 08-26-04 01:48 PM

Uppn for votes!!!!

DrasticMeasureZ 08-26-04 01:53 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

YO ONCE AGAIN SHOTTABOY HANDS DOWN YALLT THINK ITS AN LIL NEWB THINK WRONG YALL BEST TO BRING SOME HEAT DAMN IT!

shottaBOY

PUNCHES-8/10
FLOW-7/10
WORDPLAYS 10/10
STRUTURE-9/10
-34

SYSTEM CRASGHER
PUNCHES-5/10 (WEAK)
FLOW-8/10
STRUTURE-10/10
WORDPLAYS-6/10
-29

YO SYSTEM WORK ON DEM PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS DEN U'LL GET BETTA

YO SHOTTABOY

RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

SKAAL 08-26-04 02:08 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

OK I'M GONNA JUST BREAK IT DOWN LIKE THIS
SHOTTA BOY WON WITH HARDER PUNCHES
SYSTEM CRASHER HAD NONE REALLY BUT HIS FLOW WAS BETTER BUT THE VERSE WAS A LIL LAME AT THE END BUT IT WAS REAL CLOSE I HAD TO GIVE IT TO SHOTTA THOUGH DIG A LIL DEEPER NEXT TIME SYSTEM


I VOTED ON YA'LL SHIT CAN I GET SOME HONEST VOTES IN MINE SO I CAN GET EM CLOSED


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