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TAKENOTICE 08-26-04 12:22 PM

shake-spear vs WiNC
 
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6 - 12 Lines
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No d/r
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System 08-26-04 12:30 PM

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 12:30 PM.

System 08-26-04 12:35 PM

WiNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 12:35 PM.

shake-spear 08-26-04 12:46 PM

i had to rush so might not be that good bhut fuck it
here ya go

iight listen up stupid ima smoke u like chris tucker/
u a "dumb-dumb" must mean ya mutha a "sucka"/
and she loves to "blow-pop" guess im ya father/
must be da "charm" cause she blow me like no other/
i lost my last battle dey said i aint have enough word-play/
now my words-slay make dis herb-stay in third-place/
im takin second and first how bout u/
ill fill u wit lead jus so u can say u number two/(#2 Pencil)
im runnin thru dis herb, he cant run-through-me/
might be da fact i swing hammers like judge-judy/
but fuck it im takin dis battle winc's no comp/
u betta off usin the excuse that u have no comp/(cpu)
dis dude like a racecar burn rubber when he be on da bend/ ( he gets fucked)
sorry but im takin ya name wit out da C on da end/( the win)

TAKENOTICE 08-26-04 12:47 PM

aight let's get this...

I don't text in "Old English" so it's not a "Shakespearean" verse...
Pack~n~Tack you in a box of wood "Mid Evil" style so you can experience first...

I spit "spears" at ay that you can't "shake" like "brittany"...
you soft like "brownie mix" with these words i "bake" thee...

you oldschool i'm sure so you a "man playin out as a female"...
even in your relationship now your role prolly the that aswell...

It's "THE END" of your carreer go get your record changed by "strobe"...
I had the same effect on the original "shakespear" when i arsonned the "GLOBE"

I only gottah spit 9 and leave three empty you was crazy comin to the battle thinkin' you'd merk me...

aight breakdown
SHAKESPEAR his theatre's name was the GLOBE and it got BURNT DOWN...His works are considered OLD ENGLISH..in his day MEN acted out all the roles even female parts...THE END AND STROBE OUR THE ADMIN HERE...everything else is obvious this stuff prolly was too...

TAKENOTICE 08-26-04 12:50 PM

eh yo yor last line was tight nevah thought of that clean drop mane..

shake-spear 08-26-04 12:54 PM

ya shit was hot nice battle son hopefully we can do dis again somtime jus wait till i get a lil betta

TAKENOTICE 08-26-04 01:00 PM

yo mane don't knock yah shit yet wait for the votes you had a nice drop... but thnks...and i'm a Female son....lets get them votes in

DeNounced 08-26-04 01:03 PM

Voted For: WiNC

My vote has to go to WiNc for the fact that he had punches that were hitting and shakespear tended to talk about himself a little more and lacked in the punch area...
also i just wasnt really feelin shake's verse all too much...

but props to both,yall stay up...

pz.

shake-spear 08-26-04 01:27 PM

uppin for votes............................................. .....

SKAAL 08-26-04 01:39 PM

Voted For: shake-spear

OK THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT MY VOTE GOES TO SHAKESPEARE HIS PUNCHES WERE BETTER, WINC YOU RAN THE WHOLE VINTAGE SHAKESPEAREAN THING IN THE WHOLE I THINK YOU SHOULD'VE EXPANDED A LIL YA BRITTANY LINE WAS HOT THOUGH BUT ALL IN ALL SHAKES FLOW WAS BETTER PUNCHES HIT HARDERAND THA WORD PLAY TO THIRD PLACE LINE WAS RIDICULOUS


YO I VOTED ON YA'LLS SO VOTE ON MINE SO I CAN GET EM CLOSED THANKS

DRAG~ON 08-26-04 01:43 PM

Voted For: WiNC

give it 2 WINC her
verse was better she had personals
metas n sum hard hittin punches
Shake u did have wordplay but don't
4get everything else ur punches hit just
not as hard as WIN's cuz u had no real metas
n personals in yo flow
v/WINC
give a honest vote 2 da battles in my sig

shake-spear 08-26-04 01:43 PM

thnx for da vote son............. uppin for more votes

shake-spear 08-26-04 02:26 PM

uppiin for votes..................................

WORDPLAYA 08-26-04 02:30 PM

Voted For: shake-spear

give diss battle 2 Shake da wordplay
was tight da punches hit n really WIN
da way ur structure worked it didn't go wit ur flow
but urs was good 2 wit personals overall good battle
can u vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle


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