MjGrEeN vs shake-spear
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines minimum.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 04:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:27 PM.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:29 PM.

Yo let me introduce you to me, fucking around with the best will end with murder, me being guil-ty,
I slew u 24 hours a day, the beef i bring also brings in pu-tay,
i'll rock you as i sock you while i clock you then glock you,
then your boyfriend will come along and cock you,
i'm like a dragon, when i spit fire comes out,
newbie ass bitch why dont you give me a shout?

Your name is shake-spear and you think people will cheer,
for me they'll cheer, i'll spit and drink beer, i'ma leer at you thinking your Richard Gere,
it suits you to be paying for prostitutes like in pretty wo-man,
the only difference is the ho's your mom, your fuck her as she remove the teeth up off her gum, screaming saying son your #1.

As you can see i'm icing you in vexation, now i'ma rhyme and get into complication, the sensation of the nation as i layout my presentation as i see your rhymes getting old,
shit your as old as a dinosaur eating vegetation.

I beat your Dad up for acting mad, he said he wanted your ass so i bet your glad,
i'm like a pro killer when i spit my verse, cause everyone i challange is a victim, must be a curse, never rehearse the shit i'm gonna say,
i'm sorry bitch have i just ruined your day.

I'm feeling like a G cuz i just got swifty, feeling nifty as i spend fifty on your mom to stop being shifty,
I'ma have to call in a crane cause your moms driving me insane, shes in my house and she got stuck in the door, need something strong to remove her shes cracking up the floor,
fat bitch comes to get her daily meat supply, i said nomore your weight seems to mulitiply,
i'ma get high, fly through the sky as you try to diss on me, guy, after i'm done with you you'll wish you would die.

Your like a lizard, you change colour when danger approaches,
your black and blue after i'm done with you, your skills are worse than an infestation of roaches,
coaches taking people to a freak show, everyones paying to see your moms Li-bi-do.

Yoyo you must be feeling real dead now, your like a leach on bleach, i'll take you to the beach so you can tan, and so i can teach,
you must be on the computer 24 hours a day, you think your good, but hey, its your mom that sat in the way of my truck, the bitch got fuck, with a sign on her back saying "I WILL SUCK",
and on the front it said for food, i'm not being rude but your mom looks like a dude.

I think i'ma slow down and lay down the final kill cause shit i've won nigga, you must be feeling ill, and by the end of the night you'll be sucking a pill, please chill, you know my shit is tight, i'ma go now retard, say good fucking night.

here i go

finnally an easy -victory/
my flows hot like lava he flow like an "Iceberg" which means-hes-"history"/
killin him softly like laurin hill ill leave the death of green-a-mystery/
be in ya mouth like listeren .......u are jus a bitch-to-me/
u cant see me in the rap game im suprized u even found-me/
but "greens" gettin ate up like i put him in a "brownie"/
clown-me? neva-dat like acrobats ull stay-gettin-tossed/
"MJ" u suck y dont u "moon walk" ya way-to-da -lose/
got "MJ" depressed but he need more-den-prozak/
put "23" shots in ya chest and rock ya vest as a "jordan throwback"/
so stop wit da nonsence go challenge somone dat sucks-like-u/
but i guess vacuums cant use a cpu so dat sucks-for-u/

iight dats my verse one

uppin 4 votes............................................. ..

Voted For: shake-spear

give it 2 Shake his verse was way
better he had wordplay n sum metas
his punches hit harder 2
Mj Green first u flowed 4 2 long den u said
nuttin at dat u need 2 change ya structure 2 den
u'll definately flow better
v/Shake
give an honest vote on da battles in my sig

whoa, if you stop to read i had a few metas, quite a few multis and such, if i am gonna get complaints cuz my stuff is too long then w/e man cuz if you stop to read the layour is good and i stopped and took time to write, sheesh.

dont worry fam i thought ya shit was good... uppin for votes

i mean 'clown-me? neva-dat like acrobats ull stay-gettin-tossed/
"MJ" u suck y dont u "moon walk" ya way-to-da -lose/'
wheres the rhyme in this i didn't do any screw ups, but hate all you want i'm sick of it.

Voted For: shake-spear

ok ok

1st off wow green you wrote TOO many lines
you shouldnt have wasted dat many lines dawg
but that shows you enjoy rappin but sorry...

shake takes it

both strcuture was off
but his flowed better
and had punches and wordplay

so he wins

vote/shake-spear

retun the favor pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaase
dont ignore this like everybody else
and you get money for votin so return it

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thx for da vote....................uppin for votes

Voted For: shake-spear

even though u playin off mah throw back line its all good..... but mj u cant pm peeps sayin check out this battle and only vote if u think i won....how r u going to get better??? this isnt a hate or d/r vote

punches: ss
personals: none
multis: ss
metas: mj

vote: ss

he came harder and shake-spear u elevated a lot in one day did u do that website thing i mentioned?? hey go try out for violent type if u want in im impressed......

just cause its unlimmited lines doesnt mean u have to write a bible dawg just next time put a limit u write way to much people r going to just skip ur verse if u write that much just for future knowledge

Voted For: shake-spear

WELL

IM GONNA GO WITH SHAKE SPEAR

he had a shorter verse that was more to the point

MJGREEN
Wack lyrics, no depth, bad flow, horrible structure, uneven bars left and right,
Overall You got to be the worst battler i seen on this site

Yo let me introduce you to me, fucking around with the best will end with murder, me being guil-ty,
I slew u 24 hours a day, the beef i bring also brings in pu-tay,
i'll rock you as i sock you while i clock you then glock you,
then your boyfriend will come along and cock you,
i'm like a dragon, when i spit fire comes out,
newbie ass bitch why dont you give me a shout?

totally fuckin wack