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Houdini 08-26-04 05:18 PM

Ever felt alone....
 
Yo Check it'






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Grew up in a population of retrospection-
strugglin w/ the crowd when all was gettin blazed-n-hectic
Ever looked in the mirror and hated what u saw-and meant it
More than abuse, or rap and infections

Gettin Hard'r to live but still "errectin"
Notta god damn soul does show affection
So many other way's I can't express-them
Just to prove my rule's that need's mentioned

Ever felt alone on a cold-night
Whisperin' 2 ya self wishin u was right
Sleepin on the couch again....
Just creepin on the fold-out-bed

Well ever felt alone.....

Check it'
Aged but never grew up, still the same child I'd ever be a fuckin screw-up
Lit the wick-on my pen and it "blew-up", Still derranged and an ethnical-screw-up
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Man ever felt alone....

G_$peed 08-26-04 05:23 PM

it was nice but needs more wordplay...

intensify effect 08-26-04 08:23 PM

that shit was tight dogs word up nice flow and multis... good job...

8.0 keep droping like its hot!!!!! V.T


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