sHoTTaBoY vs Phantom
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
iight hoe talkin all dat shit and i need some elevation so we battlin. if u dont accept it is understood.lol. i will drop after you
no feeding

3-0 is a ko

Minimum posts to vote: 175

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 02:59 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 07:42 PM.

60 minutes to drop? wtf man? its 6 lines, it should take no more than 5 minutes.........

aight but here we go......

I Turned This Lil Fuck Ghost Thats Why He Claimin He A Phantom../
He Juss Makin Up 4 The Fact Hes Juss Another VICTIM../
I'm Spittin Like 100 Round Juss Incase I Miss-Him../

Man I Couldnt Give A Fuck If You A VET../
Bring All Ya Boys, Hell Call Up DIPSET, You Gon' Need All The Fuckin Help You Can GET!

Uppppppppin 4 Votes

Phantom You Shouldda Put A Rule Where NO Vets Can Vote....
They All Gonna Vote Against Me Cause I Called Em Dickheads..........

An Drop Ya 6 Lines, It Took Me 3 Minutes, How Long It Takin You Man??

quit jackin off n drop ya lines kid......
its ONLY 6 lines n i dropped mines like 20 minutes ago....

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 11:15 PM.

quit tryin to sway votes and just let them pick the better verse.

this kid claims hes not an herb, but shit, his records 2 and 4...
to beat me, you need a "following" bigger than "black folks at liquor stores"...
you actually trying to battle me? well i guess its proved this kids stupid...
throwin up my piss is the only way you gunna be "spittin pimp fluid"...
you have gunplay in your lyrics but have scarce even held a damn bb...
if i painted my personal portrait on your retina, you could still not "see me"...

Whut Took You So Long Man?
I Mean Hell, I Dropped In 5 Minutes You Took Over The Time Limit..............

But Whutever, UPPPPIN 4 VOTES YA'LL


I'm Gnna Be A Man n Acyually Agree Your Verse Was Nice PHANTOM, Ya Still A Dickhead But Nice Verse, Good Luck Wit The Battle

I'll Battle You F'Real Sumtime Soon If U Want Too.....?

Peace
1
Holla

uPPPPPPPPPIN 4 VOTES Ya'll......
I Prolly Got Merked But I Dont Care....
Vote On This Shit n My Other Battles Ya'll
P E A C E

Voted For: Phantom

phantom came with the bettah verse he just seemed to be on another level then shottah his hits hit harder and he used some basic metahs and wordplay...
Shottah you verse wasn't bad just basic you need tah try puttin metahs and more wordplay in yah verse...
Both need tah get up on those personals....
STAY UP STAY ACTIVE VOTE OFTEN
drop an EXPLAINED vote in my battle verse shakespear ...

uppiin ............---------------.................

Voted For: Phantom

Phantom...
First bar was a good metiphore....and a funny one...
second bar was kinda self hype.
The last bar was OK. the last line saved the BB gun line.

Shotta.
get off the thug spray ur rounds at him shit.
Be original. And Use more wordplay.

Hit this wit an honest vote. thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145580

lets get this ko over with already.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-

Voted For: Phantom

Aight big props to both of yall...

Phantom pretty nice verse man, "black folks at liquor stores"...
that flat out had me rollin lol. I liked how you put effort into your wordplay as well, I think a lot of people only put emphasis on punches, where as wordplay is a major factor as well. Good creativity there, and the verse flowed pretty well, a lil choppy here and there...but that could just be how im reading it. Overall it was just a really good verse.

Shottaboy...Im not sure why you didnt go 6 lines, in a battle this short you need all you can get just like your last line. Your flow kinda fell off with each of your lines being shorter in the first bar, then your 2nd bar you didnt get in your whole 6 lines I think that hurt you a lil bit. Your punches really werent hittin that hard...just be a lil more creative with the way you write. Put a little more wordplay in as well to set your punches up better.

Voted For: Phantom

Ok, Shottaboy's first bar really didn't rhyme to start off.. victim and phantom won't work.. phantom had an okay opener and he followed with some pretty okay lines. phantom also had better stucture with no really stretched lines and he wrote more to give for more content.. so honestly, my vote goes to the phantom for punchlines and structure..