newbie here lookin for help
 

yo im looking for someone to pretty much take me under thier wing, i want a vet thats got a big name, that can help me elevate alot.

Rof-Pms-LmfaoO @ A Vet With A Big Wing..

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yo thanks but i want someone to help me elevate my game, and spread out my name...

have trooper or trigge... or one of te mods help ya there fella

^ Just Do What You Do..!! Drop Something.. Lets See What Your Working With..!!

yeah.... ...

yo man i spit this verse liek it aint nothin
man waht are you thinkin, your more fruity than a blueberry muffin
but ILLegitimate is the shit man you and know it
you wanted me to spit so ill throw it
no hesitation cuase the freestyle is gettin better
getting the ladies horny as their pussies gettin wetter
no doubt im the greatest, flyiest mc around
you step to me bitch ill put you 6 feet underground
so go ahead talk shit about me, im best rapper
thats full out gangster shit, i aint no cracker
i put emiem to rest bitch i take him outta the game
obie trice kanye west i put all the bitches to shame

i mean thats jsut a real quick freestlye.....

how is that? is taht good?

Might Want To ...

-Up Your Vocabulary

-Use A Bit More Wordplay

-Throw Some Half Decent Punches Into Your Verse...

-Multies.. Could Have Been Added Into The Mixx.. Etc;!!!

aww how sweet DML welcome back.
what do you actualy look like?
pz.

^^ Umm I've Been Back.. For!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A While....

INo i sed it the other day aswell just being real nice :).
what do you realy look like DML?
btw he is under my wing ;).
pz.

[QUOTE=Archeologist]INo i sed it the other day aswell just being real nice :).
what do you realy look like DML?
btw he is under my wing ;).
pz.[/QUOTE]


Under Your Wing? ... Umm What Exactly.. Are You Trying To Get @?