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meki vs J DOT
Battle Rules:
6 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting spit same time Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-26-04 at 09:17 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:48 PM.
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meki has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 08:57 PM.
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just like yo sig, everythings bigger than you
"New era of femcees", your first on my merk menu your real funny with yo he say, she say lines She cant get in-touch with rhymes cause she work like a mime You tryna make it to the top, better find a different route This is a one-sided battle, Look, just knock yo self out The crooks been let out, and Im murderin Rhymes You shouldve just did like ice pick did, you shouldve declined Your not straight, i got proof you wanna be a DYKE Unscramble yo name...you wanna be called MIKE(meki is her name) But i gotta go now, ruff_tuff wants a beaten I think ya'll both girls...which one gunna start eaten...lol holla bac |
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HeHe, [FONT=tahoma]Your Just Dick, When You Vote On A Battle The Verse Erects. Cant Read Up To Level. Only Mad Cause Hes Been Born With Birth Affects. You' Terfs Been Stepped, Like Culo's Beat By Lil John. Filler Verse Will Drill This Filman Nurse, Even With The Middle Gone. Spits Wack Round The Clock, Even Dribbles Wrong. Been Merked n Smashed With Fonts. You Seem To Trash A Thread n Purpose, Well Whats The Point Of A Trash Response? Im Tired Of These Hypocrits, As If Rapverse Made Bots.(robots) If It Was This Easy To Toss This Garbage, I Would'v Eagerly SucceededTo Connect J's Dots. You Maybe From The Land, But Like Egypt You Cant Fit In. And Again, Your Fam Dont Exist...Like Santa's Kin. A Mere Man Of Sin, A Can Villian. Your Crimes Cope Months. The Kinda Cat That Changes His Sig. So Opponents Rhymes Dont Punch. WroteLines Dope Once, Meaning..Have Occurred Rarely. Hasnt Reached Vet Awareness, N Just Above Herb Barelly. |
you put that shit bout i dont like pac, so pac nut riders can vote for you, wut a asshole
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Voted For: meki
woh, woh... this fem slaughterd JDOT. no beef, just i think JDOT was expecting her newbness to show out in her verse, but she keyed some decent stuff...idk if thats your best or what, but JDOT you should have tried your usual effort. meki: strongest personal- Spits Wack Round The Clock, Even Dribbles Wrong. Been Merked n Smashed With Fonts. You Seem To Trash A Thread n Purpose, Well Whats The Point Of A Trash Response? strongest punch- A Mere Man Of Sin, A Can Villian. Your Crimes Cope Months. The Kinda Cat That Changes His Sig. So Opponents Rhymes Dont Punch. strongest wordplay- You' Terfs Been Stepped, Like Culo's Beat By Lil John. Filler Verse Will Drill This Filman Nurse, Even With The Middle Gone. weakest line- You Maybe From The Land, But Like Egypt You Cant Fit In. And Again, Your Fam Dont Exist...Like Santa's Kin. overall: not bad for your first verse, in my opinion you murdered JODT's half ass attempt. i say JDOT (if he loses) calls a rematch...and actually tries. vote: meki return the favor, in my sig... vs. curelean, honestly... |
yea she dropped a nice verse...thats just one...i was worried bout ruff tuff...so you right, i shouldve came harder, this is the weakest from me, BUT...thanx for the HONEST vote, i'll return a HONEST favor, you know i do
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uppppppppp thisssssssssssssss shitttttttttttttt yooooooooooooo
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upppnnnnnnn this again
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Voted For: meki
This Was A Hella Close Battle..... Nice Punches n Nice Vocab From You Both.... Meki Had Btter Structure n The Verse Was Humouress...Humour In Rhymes Always Does It 4 Me.... I Cant Sit n Fault Any Of Ya Verse Cause I Liked Em Both... But MEKI Got My Vote Keep Spittin Them DOPE Rhymes Ya'll... Good Lookin!! Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles !!1!! |
uppin here, need votes. you wont see this til you vote though.
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Voted For: meki
wow i think you got this...i was gonna vote for j dot but damn them lst 3 lines killed him....that was crazy..you should have just tried and spit like that the whole time....that sig line was clean...and its true.....lol...and your ending was clean.....6/10 jdot...weak herbish type of flow...wow i actually thought about battlin you...cant believe it myself...but you got mad potiential kid just keep battling and you will be pretty good.... 5/10 vote=meki |
Voted For: J DOT
meki good punches and vocab and wordplay but disses were lacking here as well as personals also they aint hit right good flow kinda streched though still nice a 6/10 j-dot good opener personal good wordplay and vocab was ok also alot of nice links basically i think you won cuz you had more personals and disses and it was interresting to read7/10 meki had a good verse but it aint have enugh slick shit and got kinda boring |
Voted For: J DOT
dot took this by a thread meki had good vocab and a good flow but connct j dots line is supaplayed, that lil jon line was wack and so was that santas kin line.j verse was simple but i like the laast 6 lines especially that MIKE one, j needed harder punches though.... had better struc was easier to read too.no real metas in this and j personals were better...j wins, good shit meki why u aint post ya verse fa our battle meki i hate dq wins plus my verse was aiight for u,i saw u online too. anyway ill rematch u but itll take a minute cuz i got a few people i want to battle 1st.......i just wanted u to read my verse though... matter fact ill post it to u so it doesnt get wasted and people can decide if it was good, but u better than i thought.... j dot u too, keep elevating ya |
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