Yvonne's first Open Mic..check it
iight yo check it....
Your stressing me is of no fucking use trynna game me?...bitch u so fucking loose this anger developes in my own silence dont make me own ya,cos den it gon be violence i got alot of memories on how u made me cry but i'ma make 'em old stories...xcept u wanna die how dare you ask a whole me for a lil respect when u know i'ld say FUCK U without ant regrets? expect "the heavens" call....till u pay u fucking debth! n i wanna give u a taste of my pinky glock then tell me how it feels to c ur blood pop cos therre aint NO PEACE till i pull a fucking shot if you looking for a dick to ryde....herre..catch d fucking mic thought i cant spit tight,but u wish u were my type i keep flowing as fast like a ride,its iight u take a flight cos i'ma make u know this aint a dyke & i eat w/e's ripe for 6 years you werent present in my life and now u want me to love ya..u know shit aint right you'ld never reach my height cos u a bitch that cant even bite if you wanna spet tight,grab a pen and start to write im like a fire and on me u just a cube of ice i'll grind u into pieces...like tiny grains of rice cos im black and i can fight,and u wack cos u white...thats right RIDE = WHIP.....a whip....a car (for who dosent know) BITCH = THE FEMALE DOG....not bitch as we all always intend Note : i came up with this verse listening to "act a fool" of master p...i tryed rapping it to that beat and i swear it comes out tight...but anyhow...y'all tell me what ya fink... holla 1 |
nice lil drop yvonne who were u tlkn bout in it though or were u tlkn of no one?
u gettin betta like i said u would n im proud of u.....u wanted 2 give up but i told u n told u keep practicin u'll get betta...arent u glad u listened?miss ya holla back peace |
lol yeah thanx....
actually i was talking bout my mum and a bitch...i kinna mixed it up cos i wrote donw things as they came to my mind.... thanx anyways uppin for more feed bax... holla!! |
Damn...that was intense...I need a womanlike you by my side...shit you got more anger than 16 republicans in a democratic convention!!
I like that shit!!!! keep on writin ma...you got somethan called talent!! |
thanx :)
who knows y i aint never gd in battles....hmmmm...o well uppin |
yo aight
i checked out ur first battle thing u aight i say
any way i gota go battle remember ma name im seeken fame check ma first battle out when i do aight peace. |
errrr..........ok but on herre u was to give a feedback on the verses i droped...lol o well
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yo that shit was tight, it is about time gurls start to become good at this shit~
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word..........
uppin for more peeps............. critiques are welcomed too 1 |
girl dat was a sick spit, do dat sh!t in ya battlez....ud kick ass girl.
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feedbak
yo baby sik drop deff got sum sik skillz, just don't do what most people get caught up in which is so much form and context, just keep that in mind, check any of my battles and see no context, yet everyone get's served.
keep it up... one |
Daaaaamn, That Was DOPE...I Was Really Feelin Ya Frustration In Ya Lyrics, Loved The Drop...
Keep Em Comin BabyGirl.. P E A C E |
thanx y'all....:)
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just uppin this
*while i think of sometelse to drop next* |
damn.....shawtie got some anger there.........and ya let it out nicely in a dope drop gal.........good piece right thurr......keep em comin gurl.........pz
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