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Verbal Abuse vs Lethal Lunatic
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20 linez max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r votes Topic: Dream Come True Council vs A.I Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 08-31-04 at 12:51 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Verbal Abuse DQ'ed for going over line limit |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 04:03 PM.
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Lethal Lunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 08:49 PM.
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*met a cali girl online* shes prude in lue of physicality, like a high vaccine. intercorse combining us together, would be a fiction climax scene. a highschool rumor, an as if...instead of sealing a deal. sexually, this chick dont know the meaning of feel. might manage to confess fatigued love, to get into her pants. which would mark a first, females fall so fast when romanced? ill commit to finish my work, on terms if it can happen rapidly. says shes down to give it all, but i wont stand a man in apathy. *3rd week straight of conversation* "not so photogenic, but im a candid type with dashing figure." she responds, "im quite the opposite, with a matching vinyard." completely off my heels, how abstract must she belittle me? vinyards? might she obstruct me from pervert and attempt to pre-civil me? fiddles games with my mind, and shes a bit eccentric. a valley girl, the ones that cry half way through omitted grinch flics. udderly i still dream to conceive, to lay a virgin is like your first words. a crueshal beginning. i wont be obscure with signs, i long to surf her curves. *discuss sexual involvement* must be religious, 16 and independent. persay still jewish? musletuff, i found your secret, candles and foreplay will do it. i hope your not a bleeder, or my tools will creed futile. (few-tial) ill take command of movment, as i procceed, you rival. ive been trying to picture you, slim and not quite thick set. dont get it twisted, i dont want a relationship. just trying to get my dick wet. in response, "same here papi. looking for a summer fling." a virgin and a prude, could not have said a dumber thing. *the meeting, dirty talk* i booked the room. one bed, TV, and coffee table. itll be a peice of work, when those maids reassemble that sloppy cradle. lets head on up. by the way, your just like you described. most def a second date will quickly follow might you survive. ell i dig you too. a second date depends on your performance." well i got somthing for yuh, peep. "Oh My God are you enormous !!!" its a birth affect, i call it god's blessing to gifted people. cant compare me with your X, that guy you say had a citrus needle. ill fuck you til my dick is feeble, i got tricks that we will put in work. this frank will spread your lips so wide, its possible for a foot insert. *the act* strip down naked, hormones kick. dick and nipples hard. under sheets began symbiosis, we swet til grip is sparred. mind drifts in thought, how do hoes keep men so patient? im no ordained being, i flip position to spark my innovation. mid dusk to crickets chirping, more sex as times unloaded. i lost my initial wishes, my conclusion well combined my motive. to face my queen, the conquered scene. we finished missionary. she cummed so heavy slick, i focused little to blemish the inscision weary. its done, your white dress has vanished. us both in loss of words. me, smiling in cause of damage. and her thoughts are lost for sure. imaturaly stating, " the TV's small. and it could not had been greener room..." but random as she is, " its fine... id consider it a dream come true". True Love, Nah, Just A Vet n Virgin One Night Stand. bold= the virgin speaking |
I'll post later on tonight
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Dream Come True
August 13 1991
A Dream come true that’s waiting to happen
Finally I’m a get out from a place I was trapped in A place that is dark, empty, full of hunger Emotions in my tryin to come out from down under Tears of joy cuz I’ll soon see my mother I’ll soon hug her, love her, more than others 1 love, 2 parents, a lovin father and mother I’ll have a chance to be cared for, from one another Till then I’ll be dream of both of you And see if my one and only dream came true November 13 1991
Only have to wait a few more hours till I’m out This is all about, wat I was first in doubt But now, I can finally see wat it is like now If it is weird or how I dreamed about, how!!! A few more minutes to wait getting impatient Do they live where everyone is from different nations Hearing my mother cry, it’s her dream too I see some one else who is it, I’ll soon know who It’s my father, lookin at me wit tears of joy too 3-2-1 I’m finally here a new born wit a dream that came true |
^^ur dqed 20 minutes max only I won
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
DAMN!!! That was fuk'n sick VA. Big Up's.
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LOL....Your gonna take a crew battle win from a d.q like that....omfg.
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This was feedback posted for Lethal Lunatic
good job both of yall. just peepin the polls .
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who wants to drop the first vote?
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who wants to drop the first vote?
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