Updated - NBA Remix
 

Hopefully this is the last time I will redo this song. I put a lot of time into it, so please peep the shit and leave some feedback :thumbup:

NBA Remix

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that shit is hella hotter tyhan that strike back........but for real thats real hot...you need to be in a real studio.........i htink oyu can get a deal with that song...im for real....

he said ...somehting like..i got just about as many net fans...as new jersey do...
that shit was kinda clean...lol

lol.....I'm glad somebody likes it :D

I kinda stole the whole concept from Joe Budden, but I used way different metas and shit

it was aight.......i just listened to alcatractz and 13th they are hot....

That Shit Was Good ... Beat Was Tight ... And Stayed On "Topic" ... Ya Flow Was On Target All Way Thru ... Nice Lyrics Dog ... Keep It Up Man ... Hot Song ...

thankz for da reply, yo for real i wana collab with u, holla at me aim: beatlerapper or msn: BlakeHaldane@hotmail.com

for real dat song is nice

yo- shit was correct... Its not 100% perfect but i was feelin most of it- the sound coulda been a little crisper but it was good, your delivery sounded better, you sound a little like DI only your style is elevated lyrically- which i think shines on this- you can tell you were workin hard- good shit. 1

^^^LOL @ sounding like DI.....I was losing my voice and it was soundin dope so I didn't fight it :thumbup:

Good Looks though...How do you make your shit shound so crisp? Is it my mic or am I doing something wrong in Cool Edit?

i think it has alot to do with the mic / computer - I don't know much about cool edit but I know there are ways to get a really crisp sound from it but it depends on ur soundcard i think how good a job it does.

over rated responces. cons- vocals too high, flow was strugglin towards the beginning. your secondary vocals, the ones that overlap were not linked right, they would be either before or after the words they are spose to link with. pro's, lyrics were intelligent, good meta's n punches, vocals shine better at some parts than others. flow was on point at certain times. which makes it all in all a pretty good track. i would say my best bit of advice is to work on a consistant flow. stay up

Thanks for the feedback. I know what you are talking about with my secondary vocals. What I did was recorded it twice and used one as my secondary vocals to give it a little more of a "not doctored" feel to it. I guess I just need to doctor it up though....lol. Thanks :thumbup: