Empire vs Tachyonic Vokals
 

Battle Rules:

6 -12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Links

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 04:05 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 04:06 AM.

Ok I accept but you spit first, how 'bout that, but if "no" then i'll go...

Also, so i won't have to waste time, Both of us should have our verses in by 12AM midnight...

Tachyonic VoKals has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:02 PM.

Sorry, man, my bad for not accepting it...
Agree on this by PM or post "let's have both our verses due today by 12 midnight since tomorow will be school"

fine ill write later :thumbup: no feeding is in the rules so who drops first dont matter

Iight then lets keep it this way...
Umm i don't feed and I won't...
Midnight 12 midnight and we have the same timezone so, if your late the extension is 30 mins...
May the best Person win!!!!

ok i agree especially since we all know that will be me :laugh:

My 'verbs' 'X'out 'herbs' like 'Belly' fan of 'Nelly' look at his 'handle'
Either dont know rap or you 'gay' either 'way'they should 'ban you'(1)

No 'way' this like 'N.B.A' and you no more then a 'munchkin'
You get 'left sun' think ya 'percept shun' is in need of 'adjustment'(2)

'Grammer' say you clap 'hammers' rock 'bandanaas' and 'bag whores'
But you never held a 'mag' yous a 'fag' and thats why ya pants 'sag for'(3)

Never 'scuffled' most 'trouble' you seen was 'shop lifting'
Still 'waiting' ya 'elevation' like trash weed its 'not lifting'

FINISHER-
13 cant 'drive' cant 'survive' without ya mommy to 'run you'
So 'fuck words' im gonna 'fuck her' be ya daddy then 'son you'(4)

EXLANATIONS-
1)'X' stared in 'Belly' little metaphore and his last name is 'VOKAL' thats a 'Nelly' clothing line and he either he dont know rap or hes gay cuz thats the only ways he can like 'Nelly'
2)his old name is precept shun and i overshadow him like a munchinkin in the n.b.a
3)he talks madd gansta shit but hes only 13 and he only sags his pants cuz hes gay and wants people to see his ass
4)hes only 13 he cant do shit withour his mommy she runs him so im gonna fuck her and be his daddy

I could tell this guy’s pussy and weak, gave up on his OWN crew.
It’s like forgetting to return books, cause his rhymes are overdue.
This kid must be a big joke, he'll die when he's smoked like coke.
Guy’s probably just breaking his bread, except he’s “bar broke.”
This is like a game, but I bet he still couldn't get a play on words.
He needs to balance all his fucking “lines”... like telemarketers.
Thought this kid was hard, but only cause he’s lines are stone aged.
Old as fuck, thought he was made a vet, but bitch was never made.
Bet this kids gonna be rushing out of the battle, like classes dismissing.
Kid’s like failing planes, brings the fact his punches are always “missing.”

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

syck multies man

OK... Good we both did 10 lines...
Good battle...
except your making Fake Personals saying that: he talks madd gansta shit but hes only 13 and he only sags his pants cuz hes gay and wants people to see his ass
O well but they won't see this... so it doesn't matter...

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Voted For: Tachyonic VoKals

empire- weak punches. iight flow and structure, wordplay was there but it wasnt very good. sorry. youre definatlt getting better but youre just not at a top level yet. elevate on ya punches son.lol........6/10

T.K.- nice personals and punches which would win you the battle alone but you also had great structure and flow also. elevate a lil bit on the wordplay and metas.hot shit tho....8.5/10

v//tachyonic vokals