MaN-DeM vs MjGrEeN
 

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Check in by: 09-01-04 at 06:43 AM

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MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:44 AM.

MaN-DeM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:44 AM.

Yo, when u breathe i see ice,
you tried to sell your mom for my lyrics, but you'll find there twice the price,
i'ma roast you with my lyrics cuz i'm #1,
i'll burn you like the powder from my Colt 45 Gun/

I'm like a samurai when i'm provoked i'll slice you,
like the 'Terminator' i'll annihilate you,
you wanna act like 'J-Kwon' and threaten me with a gun,
i'll kill you with my lyrics because i am the chosen one/

Getting beat seems to be your number 1 forte,
now your complaining cuz i'm straight and your too gay,
I'm like 'Samuel L Jackson' and i got that clinical style,
i'll beat you so bad you'll take tips from '8 Mile'/

Your like 'Britney Spears' because you think your toxxic,
i'll get redneck on your ass cuz you know i 'rocks it',
I'm the winner of this battle and the fact is you lose,
i've got your mom and your sister here, the one i'll fuck you can choose/

Dont try and spit ur grimy rhymes to me
ur just a fucked up wannabe , im gonna merk u down to the ground then slap u around an put u bac down

i'm gonna fuck up your world andthen fuck your girl, bitch screaming cuz i am rocking her world, Mj i'm like a tazer, when u attack me i shock you in defense, your rhyming sucks so much ur lookin dense,

nice job u copied one of my verses from a previous battle i put 'I'm like a tazer i shock you in defense, your getting pissed on dude your looking a little tense' u need to elevate.

Voted For: MjGrEeN

Okay, Hands Down, MJGREEN Gets My Vote..

Not Really A Contest, MJGREEN Hit Harder With Better Punches, Better Vocab n More Personal...

Man-Dem Ya Flow Was A Lil Weak, You Need 2 Elevate Your Rhymes, Broaden Your Vocabulary n Experiment With Diffrent Styles.....

Good Lookin Ya'll...

Holla Back With Honest Votes On My Battles

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im a newbie at this i need some help and advice

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This was feedback posted for MjGrEeN
 

good shit keep writin i hope to see more .....................

well cud u vote lol...............................

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Voted For: MaN-DeM

what the fuck is this but nun the less he gets it for meatas in both bars he got them but wack stucture but flow he had
v/man-dem
return the favour in my battle between dapunchlineking thanks peace