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Reckless vs World Famous
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-01-04 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 01:12 PM.
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world famous has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 01:16 PM.
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16-20 lines, aiight?
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u copy RB vets styles & punches, i'll swallow this head
cuz even orders are sick and tired of u following them .. pussy, i'll tell on u for cheatin, but won't get my tattles far cuz i realized ur names missing the "W" like ur battles are im waiting to beat Spul, a must when flowing, fuck.. your hated so much.. u make a-rival just by showing up i`ll wreck some, with no affection - get whored & perish if you could step son, it'd be by a former marriage and remember that, whats the cost to be reminded? ya sig'll go from winning streak to "Loss to feeble minded" don't speak in my presence, faggot, itll end with hatred cuz ur room to talk is about to get fucking renovated cuz you've got fans on here man, but confess it they .. gave me more respect than u when I came here yesterday the lesson? sway, cuz u got no style for boastin kid matter fact, only kinda form u got is the one u posted in its no guess i'll protest, but wont let up the beating i mean.. my fists & ur face should set up a meeting even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio' |
aiight here is my drop: You say you're Irish, Polish, Jewish, white, and... everything else Also the poster boy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself You say you won't merk anyone, cuz it's tru, you're fuckin' wack What you gon do wit yo verse, when the baboon wants it's ass back? You even admitted that I'm the champ. I bet it came from the heart Seriously, if I wanted to hear from an ass, I'd jus let out a fart You're a wack ass psychopath, I'm gon put you out of commision Yea, I've seen people jus like you....... but I had to pay admission You called yourself a bitch.......................... and even a red neck too I've come across rottin' corpses, that are less offensive than you You come over from RB......................... and you try to act real tough (1) We all spring from apes.............. but you didn't spring far enough When people say you wack, you won't accept it, and you hide ear (2) you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas You suck in text, you ain't a champ, they all gave you a pass (3) Your verses are as useful, as windshield wipers on a goats ass Such a wack kid, I don't mind riskin' my winnin' streak on Hopefully, after I merk yo ass, yo wack ass will be gone Unlike people's beliefs....................................... my rustyness is gone If you wanna be World Famous............. I suggest you go on Swan (4) Explanations: (1)- Feeble Minded from RB is his alias (2)- He won't listen when people call him wack (3)- Won RB text tourney, but he prolly got a free pass is what I said (4)- TV show where ugly people go to turn from ugly to good lookin' yea, aiight uppin' for votes |
aiight here is my verse: You say you're Irish, Polish, Jewish, white, and... everything else Also the poster boy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself You say you won't merk anyone, cuz it's tru, you're fuckin' wack What you gon do wit yo verse, when the baboon wants it's ass back? You even admitted that I'm the champ. I bet it came from the heart Seriously, if I wanted to hear from an ass, I'd jus let out a fart You're a wack ass psychopath, I'm gon put you out of commision Yea, I've seen people jus like you....... but I had to pay admission You called yourself a bitch.......................... and even a red neck too I've come across rottin' corpses, that are less offensive than you You come over from RB......................... and you try to act real tough (1) We all spring from apes.............. but you didn't spring far enough When people say you wack, you won't accept it, and you hide ear (2) you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas You suck in text, you ain't a champ, they all gave you a pass (3) Your verses are as useful, as windshield wipers on a goats ass Such a wack kid, I don't mind riskin' my winnin' streak on Hopefully, after I merk yo ass, yo wack ass will be gone Unlike people's beliefs....................................... my rustyness is gone If you wanna be World Famous............. I suggest you go on Swan (4) Explanations: (1)- Feeble Minded from RB is his alias (2)- He won't listen when people call him wack (3)- Won RB text tourney, but he prolly got a free pass is what I said (4)- TV show where ugly people go to turn from ugly to good lookin' yea, aiight uppin' for votes |
Btw, all of my lines have wordplay or a punch in them, so if you dont get them ask .
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THE FUCK I voetd but it didnt poll and it got it like this
Dopness yo this is a fucking tite battles but why 100 posts to vote and set it up on front lines !??!??! if anybody says this battles was wack or igt there fuckign stupid prollly empire would say that… Feeble Minded aka World Famous: your shit was DOPENESS, yo that shit was tite I understand all ya stuff and it was hard hitting you had cool punches and good personals also ya structure was good and ya flow was good with all… umm nice shit nice creativity and I liked the last lines the best…. even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio' ^ dope Personals: 8/10 Punches: 7.7/10 Structure: 8.3/10 Flow: 8/10 Opener: 6/10-blah it didn’t sound rite “I’ll swallow your head” rofl Closer: 8.3/10 Overall: 7.71/10 Reckless: Yours is fuckign DOPE too, you had tons of personals and strong punches you was good I understanded all ya stuff and you had more funnyier lines you had good structutre but ya flow on some lines was a lil off but you was good though best lines is You say you won't merk anyone, cuz it's tru, you're fuckin' wack What you gon do wit yo verse, when the baboon wants it's ass back? Personals: 8.7/10 Punches: 8.2/10 Structure: 7.5/10 Flow: 7.2/10 Opener: 7.2/10 Closer: 7.6/10 Overall: 7.73/10 Feeble: Overall: 7.71/10 Reckless: Overall: 7.73/10 This was a fucking close battle but I vote Reckless but both were dope |
Voted For: world famous
Sorry, but I gotta give this one to Feebs. He owned in every aspect. Spul came nice, but not nice enough. Nice job Feebs, I was just saying how I thought you were overrated too....lol Step son line and room to talk line are what won this one :thumbup: Vote - Feeble |
This was feedback posted for world famous
Spul did it in mine...so ill do it in this....
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Voted For: world famous
V/ world He had hard hitting punches every bar while SPuL only had 2 good punchs...all them links man...prolly had 50 pop ups....world had witty punches...and wordplay was nice...concepts were more complex and his punches really stood above spuls... |
This was feedback posted for Reckless
umm damn good battle it would have to go bar for bar and im too lazy so fuck it. but spul you used ass like 10 times in your verse and world famous, you coulda came harder. checkin polls...
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Voted For: Reckless
hot battle i gave this one to u tho, cuz u had a better overall verse and better punches. i especially like that punch wit "Yea, I've seen people jus like you....... but I had to pay admission"that was mad hot Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Reckless
this was a close battle both were pretty even...both had nice punches,aight flow,nice personals,okay wordplay,and some nice openers,World Famous 9.5/10 Reckless 9.6/10....world famous would have won if reckless flow would have started bad like it did when he was finished.....Reckless your flow was falling apart Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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