†ArchAngel †vs Trooper
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good luck A.I Vs Council Crew Battle Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-01-04 at 03:24 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:49 AM.
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â€- ArchAngel â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:50 AM.
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Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker In "Advance" 2 Thumbs Down 2 Your "Chants" Your "Not God Sent" Ya Times Over and Done with Like sprints Performed by Clark Kent Like Aaliyahs Rememberance your Finished~Like an Unreal Nympho Learn some Acceptance You and Victories like Shaquille and Limbo Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination Your Attributes Unheard of Like R kelly Legal Age sexual Relations 25-4 Equals "Inconsistent" Like Aritficial Intelligence Inspections U vs Me~Odds are Lopsided Like Baby Caridges On Inersections *Under his Title he said he was God Sent* |
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*Clark Kent was Played by Christopher reeves who is now Crippled* |
You a joke, kid ,Provokin me to raise da bet when I fold ya frame...
Think you the shit? I'll put ya head in ya lap so you could hold ya brain... I play criminal' sports,you couldn't come ill even wit genital warts... you punches miss,so how are you winning when you got ripped by -Explicits'-two-line-diss Don't get smart-kid! have you wrapped up and-tarnished,got asthma? Dawg i'll leave you gaspin regardless.. When you vote,battlers turn into protesters of Gay marriage,cuz they don't count ya shit.... My flow's over the top of your head, like i'm drowning kids... You gettin eaten alive but you only lunch for a boy... man you gettin crunched-and-then-soiled, How ya verse gonna mix when ya flow is vinegar and ya punches are oil?.. evident you can't elevate cuz all your spits are wack, cuz like "midgets" you can talk shit, but can't "say shit to my face!"... |
This was feedback posted for Trooper
Sick drop Troop, big up's.
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This was feedback posted for Trooper
^Trooper took this battle hands down, lol.. ha ha nice drop from both though..
just feedback, and no disrespect, lmfao.. |
Voted For: Trooper
this was a close one, but i had to go with trooper because he came more consistent and didnt fall off during his flow...arch-you fell off at the beginning with a bar or two, then at the end with a bar or two...but yall both had nice punches, trooper had some good multies and shit...yall both lacked on DIRECT personals...work on that...but all around good battle, and nice verses drop Explained HONEST votes in the sig folks |
This was feedback posted for †ArchAngel â€
good job playa. just peepin the polls .
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Uppin
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This was feedback posted for †ArchAngel â€
nice shit just lookin at the poll
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Uppin~`~`
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my vote
Yo first of all both of you are raw as fuck,,,,but like the other guy said ol boy fell off in his flow in the begaining,,,
but trooper kept it going an didnt slip up at all,,,,since ol boy sliped I got to give it to trooper because he really didnt make a mistake,,, but both of you are raw as fuck,,an remember i said it,because its true ~The out come~ creativity+ flow+ punches+ hardest bars=Trooper as the winner :thumbup: |
Voted For: Trooper
archangel-ya verse wasnt really on point to me here had some nice wordplay in the first line that was nice but the punch was garbage then the midget line was ight everything else wasnt even really a punchline to me just like u was spittin some shit nothin really goin hard at him work on constent wordplay threw ya verse get more personals and fix ya structure that shit is kinda hard to read brah trooper- finally u battlin in elevated your best way to get noticed u dont need o put all them quotation marks on ya shit though pretty easy to catch things had nice wordplay threw ya whole verse that was a good thing some of ya punchs didnt really connect to me others where pretty nice though but work on more personals and try not to do your 2 lines spacing that shit aint needed brah vote trooper RETURN THE FUCKIN HONEST VOTE |
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