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God 08-29-04 03:24 PM

† ArchAngel † vs Trooper
 
Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good luck
A.I Vs Council Crew Battle


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 03:24 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 08-31-04 01:49 AM

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:49 AM.

System 08-31-04 01:50 AM

â€- ArchAngel â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:50 AM.

~Luciano~ 08-31-04 02:56 AM


Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper
Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker

In "Advance" 2 Thumbs Down 2 Your "Chants" Your "Not God Sent"
Ya Times Over and Done with Like sprints Performed by Clark Kent

Like Aaliyahs Rememberance your Finished~Like an Unreal Nympho
Learn some Acceptance You and Victories like Shaquille and Limbo

Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination
Your Attributes Unheard of Like R kelly Legal Age sexual Relations

25-4 Equals "Inconsistent" Like Aritficial Intelligence Inspections
U vs Me~Odds are Lopsided Like Baby Caridges On Inersections


*Under his Title he said he was God Sent*

~Luciano~ 08-31-04 03:00 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Trooper


In "Advance" 2 Thumbs Down 2 Your "Chants" Your "Not God Sent"
Ya Times Over and Done with Like sprints Performed by Clark Kent





*Clark Kent was Played by Christopher reeves who is now Crippled*

God 08-31-04 03:31 AM

You a joke, kid ,Provokin me to raise da bet when I fold ya frame...
Think you the shit? I'll put ya head in ya lap so you could hold ya brain...
I play criminal' sports,you couldn't come ill even wit genital warts...
you punches miss,so how are you winning when you got ripped by -Explicits'-two-line-diss
Don't get smart-kid! have you wrapped up and-tarnished,got asthma? Dawg i'll leave you gaspin regardless..
When you vote,battlers turn into protesters of Gay marriage,cuz they don't count ya shit....
My flow's over the top of your head, like i'm drowning kids...
You gettin eaten alive but you only lunch for a boy...
man you gettin crunched-and-then-soiled, How ya verse gonna mix when ya flow is vinegar and ya punches are oil?..
evident you can't elevate cuz all your spits are wack, cuz like "midgets" you can talk shit, but can't "say shit to my face!"...

Da Vinci 08-31-04 04:12 AM

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 
Sick drop Troop, big up's.

~Lady Fiya~ 08-31-04 11:58 AM

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 
^Trooper took this battle hands down, lol.. ha ha nice drop from both though..
just feedback, and no disrespect, lmfao..

M-Eazy 08-31-04 12:03 PM

Voted For: Trooper

this was a close one, but i had to go with trooper because he came more consistent and didnt fall off during his flow...arch-you fell off at the beginning with a bar or two, then at the end with a bar or two...but yall both had nice punches, trooper had some good multies and shit...yall both lacked on DIRECT personals...work on that...but all around good battle, and nice verses

drop Explained HONEST votes in the sig folks

Logic The Goonie 08-31-04 12:30 PM

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 
good job playa. just peepin the polls .

~Luciano~ 08-31-04 07:08 PM

Uppin

Paris Hilton666 08-31-04 08:46 PM

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 
nice shit just lookin at the poll

~Luciano~ 09-03-04 10:05 PM

Uppin~`~`

5MICMEDALLION 09-04-04 02:18 PM

my vote
 
Yo first of all both of you are raw as fuck,,,,but like the other guy said ol boy fell off in his flow in the begaining,,,

but trooper kept it going an didnt slip up at all,,,,since ol boy sliped
I got to give it to trooper because he really didnt make a mistake,,,
but both of you are raw as fuck,,an remember i said it,because its true

~The out come~


creativity+ flow+ punches+ hardest bars=Trooper as the winner :thumbup:

E Looch 09-04-04 09:17 PM

Voted For: Trooper

archangel-ya verse wasnt really on point to me here had some nice wordplay in the first line that was nice but the punch was garbage then the midget line was ight everything else wasnt even really a punchline to me just like u was spittin some shit nothin really goin hard at him work on constent wordplay threw ya verse get more personals and fix ya structure that shit is kinda hard to read brah

trooper- finally u battlin in elevated your best way to get noticed u dont need o put all them quotation marks on ya shit though pretty easy to catch things had nice wordplay threw ya whole verse that was a good thing some of ya punchs didnt really connect to me others where pretty nice though but work on more personals and try not to do your 2 lines spacing that shit aint needed brah

vote trooper

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