Myster.E vs Tha Flash
 

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Myster.E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:59 PM.

You best run quick as a flash, because the slickest is back, to piss in ya crack,
I'll aim at your head, you'll be missin a hat, cuz my gun's pulled out like tricks in hat,
You'll get your balls hit with a bat, you slipped in my trap,
The shit you spit is just crap, callin it rap, nah you missin the facts,
Do I have to hit you with slaps, till you collapse, wave bye to all the shit that you have,
Cuz there's no bringin you back, and the only time that I'll get you in the sack, is when you're gettin zipped in a bag,
You made me lose my rag, so I'll wipe the floor with with you,
There's nothin this boy can do, the only pen you been in drips ink blue,
I'll leave you toast not the type you raise a drink to, the type that burns and shrinks you,
You'll need a shrink soon, then you'll have to be fed using a pink spoon,
Then sink brooms in your brick tomb, before I leave I'll tell you, so you don't have to guess who, it's... that prick Doom,(I made your house go Boom!!!!)

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 10:49 PM.

Now I'm The Man That's Been Debating Where To Put Ya Face In,
Ain't No Jokers In My Hand But I'm Almost Acing (ace)//
From The 45 Ya Head Will Be Blooded An Aching,
And You'll Be Cooked Up Like A Couple Strips Of Bacon//
So I'm Gonna Rip This Nigga Named Myster E,
And When It Comes To Ya Death It'll Be A Mystery//
Ya Lyrics Are Past Tense So Their History,
While My Lyrics Are Like A Force Field U Can't Get To Me//
Nigga I'm Busy So Go Play With The Kids Cause I'm Spitting Bars,
U Taking Kids To Never-never-land U Got Michael Jackson As Ya Avatar//
U Been Here Since July And U Still A Flyweight,
Nigga U Can Try But I Know U Can't By Fate//
So I'm Warining U Nigga Don't Try Me,
Cause The Next Time You'll Be Seen Is In The Hospital Hooked To An Iv//
My Lyrics Will Leave Rashes On Ya Ass Like Poison Ivy,
So Why U Decided To Battle Me With A Record Of 2-3//
I Don't Know But I'll Leave Unknown Affects On Ya Ass Like A New Disease

This was feedback posted for Tha Flash
 

you got some nice drops cuz

uppin for votes, vote on my other battles to, i'll return the favor

Voted For: Myster.E

Myster -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Flash -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Voted For: Tha Flash

easy vote

punches- flash
personals- flash
multis- myster
metas- flash
word play- flash
flow- flash

Flash ok drop. Keep elevatin is all i can say.

Myster try more personals, and better structure. Structure doesnt impact my vote, but it does make it harder to read it. You had multis, couldnt miss em. U tried word play, but u gotta re word it.

Flash:
" So Why U Decided To Battle Me With A Record Of 2-3//
I Don't Know But I'll Leave Unknown Affects On Ya Ass Like A New Disease" nice punch and closer

myster:
"Then sink brooms in your brick tomb, before I leave I'll tell you, so you don't have to guess who, it's... that prick Doom" ok opener.

v/flash

uppinnn!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Tha Flash

LOL.........flash got this.......... better wordplay...more creative...not really feeling the slashes kinda newbish.... great flow tho.... and i love the closer.....Great drop......good battle both of you keep writing

Voted For: Tha Flash

"the only time that I'll get you in the sack" why would you want The Flash in the sack? are you gay?

that right there makes me so not want to give you this battle... I mean why would you say that? Am I missing something? Is Flash a hot ass chick? And even if she was you're battling her... why would you say that?

you know hwat never mind... I gotta give this otherwise close battle to Flash just for bringing more to the table and not getting soft on his opponant...

Vote = The Flash