Just Broke Up
 

you say u liked loving me?!
you see in ur eyes, i see otherwise,
they gave it all away, u can say what ever u want to say.
u look to cheesy, cuz u gte bord easy.
fakin to be excited bein around me, but u kno u could have just fuckin (flee,leave),
just fuckin reject me, leavin me there all fuckin allone feelin all dejected.
o'wait mayb u thought if u satyed u would gte sum,
u knew it was gonna b awile for that to come.
u didnt think we could work things out, btu what was there to b worked out?
u know what i realli think it was about?
i bet u its another girl, and she is willin to fuck aint she?
u realli wanna kno why we didnt fuck,
i told u i had a bet, i did, u see theres more.
u were my brothers friend, u were part of Da Ridge
i couldnt do that to him, what he do to me,
nothing is what he did!
i couldnt just go around fuckin his friend,
fuck who knows it could have fuck up ur guys friendship,
it is dont matta nomo its ova for now!

luvin it flow was nice...

a yo thanxs for the feedback!
1luv

yeah word...

that was weak, no ryhme schem, u need elevation

i liked it gurl u had yo flava ur own style dont let merc ruin shit for u he weak as hell fuck him, ne way good piece, 1 luv

dat was weak wtf are u talkin bout
no hate but u coulda came better
4/10

dawg she a beginner dam litin up shit yall is fukin hataz

a yo thanks for the love , i have had weaker shit before so this is a huge change

word man go eazee on her...

shit was dope.......but im seein too much love shit deese days...............but no hatin though..........dat shit was dope as hell.......