LyRiKaLMiRiKaL vs CODEE
 

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CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 12:44 AM.

aight bitch its time to rhyme and u gonna probably jump ship.
The only time u had a taste of white was with some cool whip.
U gotta dick in your mouth so much u wind up with cleft lip.
Only time u smokin is when its comin off my 12" barrel tip.
When u gettin pushed down steps thats the only time u havin' a "lil' flip."
I brought this shit and it ended up as one crazy ass flow.
U bent over and got out your skoal can out when Milian said "Dip It Low"

LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 01:22 AM.

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Verses disturb fakes an ya curse at the verbs sprayed//
his flow's bad, but at least it ain't worse than his wordplay//!!
I topple led with my wordplay and the debacle spreads as my verbs spray//...
This flawless verse *got you shakin* worse than *Bobble Heads In An Earthquake//
Guanylate ... Teachin Lessons?!? I wont leave any enemies spared//
NOPE!!... Youre location doesnt really matter cause I can murk you anywhere//
i've got the guns, while ya juss wish u was rockin lugz//
cuz it's sad when ur claim to fame is beatin a newbie once//!
u can get tossed in a fire trap, an boxed wit an ironrack//
cuz ya skill's like ya self-worth, ya lost it a while back//!!

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

one sided...lyrikalmirikal took this one, better structure better flow, better punches, and better personals, CODEE wasn't really feeling it man, basic rhymes, and not really that solid bro, lyrikalmirikal takes this eaisly

v/lyrikalmirikal

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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

Codee
aight bitch its time to rhyme and u gonna probably jump ship.
The only time u had a taste of white was with some cool whip.
^
Not feelin the opener

U gotta dick in your mouth so much u wind up with cleft lip.
Only time u smokin is when its comin off my 12" barrel tip.
^
Decent lines...

When u gettin pushed down steps thats the only time u havin' a "lil' flip."
^
Weak cause it was "cornball"ish

I brought this shit and it ended up as one crazy ass flow.
U bent over and got out your skoal can out when Milian said "Dip It Low"
^Killer finisher

LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

Verses disturb fakes an ya curse at the verbs sprayed//
his flow's bad, but at least it ain't worse than his wordplay//!!
^Ha I likes the punch but didn't like the set up

I topple led with my wordplay and the debacle spreads as my verbs spray//...
This flawless verse *got you shakin* worse than *Bobble Heads In An Earthquake//
^Again, nice punch. Microchip of emprovement on the set up line

Guanylate ... Teachin Lessons?!? I wont leave any enemies spared//
NOPE!!... Youre location doesnt really matter cause I can murk you anywhere//
^weak

i've got the guns, while ya juss wish u was rockin lugz//
cuz it's sad when ur claim to fame is beatin a newbie once//!
^barely rhymes

u can get tossed in a fire trap, an boxed wit an ironrack//
cuz ya skill's like ya self-worth, ya lost it a while back//!!
^was a decent finisher

Ok now CODEE had a nice finisher, but his overall freestyle just didn't cut it for me. Lyrikal came more consistent with his skills, especially with the punches.

P.S, vote on my sh*t. Check the signature.... \/

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uppin 4 votes let's see'em comin in keep that shit honest

uppin 4 votes let's see'em comin in keep that shit honest and real

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

aiiight, battle was pretty good....
opener - lyrikal
closer - lyrikal
flow - CODEE
punchez - lyrikal
v/ lyrikal, u just had betta punchez and i just enjoyed it more, badluck CODEE

uppin for more votes.....keep em honest 2 fellaz

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

ok codee no punches or disses ok flow structure fucked up here and vocab sucks a 1/10no hate a bad verse
lyrikal good opener here and ender good second bar too beating a newbee once lmao that was funny good disses and punches good vocab flow and structure a real nice verse here such a waste to use it here 8/10