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Shake-spear vs LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-30-04 at 04:31 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:04 AM.
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shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:11 AM.
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Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it//
But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// |
check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/
he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/ but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/ its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/ im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/ broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/ he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/ and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/ so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/ he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/ i know not that good bout i did it in 6mins |
i did mine in 14 but none the less good drop
lets get some votes |
nice verse i like it sorry i came weak but u caught me in the middle of anotha battle so i was in a rush on both them
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its kool just get some votes that all.....hit me up tommorow and well do a round 2
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uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link
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still uppin for votes....if you want votes on your battles send me the links...pace n wun
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
ok shakespere that opener was whacked as fuck i liked the monica line that was slick good flow but punches and disses lacked hard and that hurt you a 3/10 lrical good ass flow and wordplay ok vocab that defeat line is played out hard but your other punches and disses were decent and that took this for you a 5/10 |
Voted For: shake-spear
I vote for you because dude is a biter... LyrikalMirikal: Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it// But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// Quote:
After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// Quote:
Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// Quote:
biter biter biter...consider yourself banned... |
thx for votin .................... and does this mean we still acceptin votes
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
LM Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it// But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// ^woah, nice My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// ^yeah bitch!(you gettin me hyped) After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// ^he killin em so far Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// ^didn't register for me After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// ^decent This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// The finisher sucked because you lost the flow you had goin from the beginning. But this was a cool verse overall. Strong. S-S check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/ he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/ ^HORRIBLY stretched but like the way you was goin with it. but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/ its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/ ^weak cornball ish im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/ broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/ ^decent, or maybe just below decent he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/ and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/ ^very weak. so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/ he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/ ^clincher... last line held the weight of this. Lyrikal wins this just overall better skill displayed. shakes rushed his that's why his is lacking to lyrikals. |
thx for votin ....................................so i guess this battle is still gon count
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