konfuzed vs illuson
 

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 06:12 AM.

after dis battle hell be so konfuzed
well not know what do
hell suck of ja rule
cause he thinks he cool
real lyricst dont even respect ya or take ya serious
its not that we dont like ya we hate ya peroid
what ya know about bein a g
what ya know about bein an m.c.
ya wanna be like me
ya sell ya tapes out off ya trunk
in ya response ya say lets get it crunk
ya can show me respect
while i be bendin ya neck
obsein over me and ya mom havin sex
ill do it everynight
tape it so itll be in ya sight
ya coul win ya might
people probaly dont vote for me cause im white and they want me to quit
because they cant spit
yall m.c.s are whack
put a bullet and some steel in ya back
fuck ya and sayin elvate
hers it simple
yallsee me yall be cripple
its that simple
go to ya temple and pray
so drop the mic ya might get a little dignited that way

konfuzed has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 06:25 AM.

I'll stop rhymin' at 37,
Last longer than Jay-Z/
But I'm 19,
so my years left equal Eighteen.

That's two decades left
It's enough time to be Konfuzin'/
You think you can win?
Nigga, that's the REAL illusion!

Hell, I'll leave you lyin' there
In this proverbial ditch/
Pound you like pavement,
When I hit the hyrdraulic switch.

I'm climbin the battle ladder so fast,
The rungs will rattle/
I am the cowboy-rapper,
Herd you up like the fatter cattle.

They're easier to catch,
Like you're easier to beat/
My lines are like S'mores:
To everyone they are too sweet.

I think that's the end,
My bombardment of you was fun/
Try and top this shit:
But I bet it won't be done.

uppin for a few votes... holla back on the poll y'all... :banghead:

Voted For: konfuzed

dint like your structure but it dint fall off,n your punches i thought were better,liked how your dint have ta use gun play in your verse...both still need ta elevate on copmplexity though...n that smores/beat line was lame it came off as self glorification,leave that type of shit out from now on...

This was feedback posted for illuson
 

sort your structure and flow out, then i might finish readin it. no hate.

Voted For: illuson

illusion got this in tha bag. i jus wasnt feelin konf. lines or nuttin, plus illusion had a betta flow n rhymes. his punchlines were pretty tight to. the vocab could b a lil betta but...
vote=illusion

I just wasn't feelin the bite he took off of Eminem, dawg...

"real lyricst dont even respect ya or take ya serious
its not that we dont like ya we hate ya peroid"

just took it away for me, but still, no hate man. No hate.

Voted For: konfuzed

this had like a poetic feel to it which was real hott...........the style reminds me of jay two........i liked the metaphores in this one....the verse lacked personals and multies but i can understand that because of the style u wrote it in it would be kind of hard to fit multies.......but overall i was feelin this verse......

On the other hand.....the other verse had poor structure first off....there'd be one short line and a stretched line following which made the flow choppy.......both verses had poor vocab but the lines konfused had were worded better.....this verse lacked any hard-hitting puches or ne thing clever.....it was simple and required no thought....with that said i vote for Konfuzed

oh and stop by one of my battles and drop an honest vote if yall get free time

uppin for some votes on the post... holla back young'ns

Voted For: konfuzed

Weak Battle

konfuzed came harder
his punches were harder & played~out..
flow was decent..but lacked in there..
structure was decent too..(dont space ur verse out)
& wordplay was aight..

illuson..
yo punches were hard...but not hard enuff to get my vote tho..
tha flow was decent...but lack'd alot..(like konfuzed's verse)
structure lack'd too (like konfuzed's verse)..stretch ur lines out more....

overall...
konfuzed took this one..he had harder punches..a nice flow..and a 'aight' wordplay..

uppin this one y'all... vote on it with honesty and i'll vote back... holla