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L.I. 08-30-04 11:27 AM

Shabba Ranks 3-2-1 vs SmokaJoka 1-0
 
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Goodluck!!

SmokaJoka 08-30-04 12:58 PM

Heh....14

Ranks™ 08-30-04 06:56 PM

yeh, 14s good....

Ranks™ 08-31-04 09:54 PM

Your record at RB don’t make you good, nigga you gotta be fronting.
They only let you win, so you can die feeling you accomplished something.
Not for nothing, you wont be undefeated for long.
Mexicans can’t rip shit, but they sure can cut a good lawn.
Smoka’s ass, His verses will lyrically moon ya.
Ill pull this kids card, but this time it wont say get well sooner.
This dude thinks hes gully, ya fake image will ruin ya.
Last mags you dealt with, were in Triple L Jr.
And how is it possible for his shit to be fresh to me.
When this Mexican is still rocking Southpole and Paco Jeans.
And no matter how good you do in this battle, it’s a shame this kid.
Will only be remembered as the homo-thug with the rainbow sig.
You got no life…and you know that’s what everyone will say bitch.
Not cuz of the cancer, it’s all them battles that made you waste it.

SmokaJoka 09-01-04 12:17 AM

Smoke is stronger, I'll beat this herb..but it'll prove me wronger
Cuz I'd be the first...but the TM says someone already owns ya
Even so, I'll tear off Shabba's limbs, watch when I defeat this hoe
He'll be totally tubeular, when I hang him from the tree of woah
We really hate his rap, now he acts all hard with a strap
Leave rap aloan, but let it keep cash for all of your crap
Beatin me? ..your wrong to pursue, ...but I'll atone you dude
..By I'll throwing you a bone kid...since it might belong to you
Shabba thinks Joka is full of barrels of laughs, but when I blast ya...
I'll make sure you catch the joke... and you'll die from laughter
I'll make him pail, ...Kid even my spelling put you threw hell...
Cuz I really meant I threw your raps in the bottom of my trash pail
I've brought you pain, but it's clear Shabba that you've trained..
I don't need elevation kid, just watch the way I rise above the Ranks

Poppa Kap 09-01-04 05:40 PM

Your record at RB don’t make you good, nigga you gotta be fronting.
They only let you win, so you can die feeling you accomplished something.
personal but not very strong. u cudda done better.

Not for nothing, you wont be undefeated for long.
Mexicans can’t rip shit, but they sure can cut a good lawn.
sorta funny.

Smoka’s ass, His verses will lyrically moon ya.
Ill pull this kids card, but this time it wont say get well sooner.
ha nice. ur opener shudda been more like this.

This dude thinks hes gully, ya fake image will ruin ya.
Last mags you dealt with, were in Triple L Jr.
nice

And how is it possible for his shit to be fresh to me.
When this Mexican is still rocking Southpole and Paco Jeans.
im english...perhaps thats why i dont get that.

And no matter how good you do in this battle, it’s a shame this kid.
Will only be remembered as the homo-thug with the rainbow sig.
ok.

You got no life…and you know that’s what everyone will say bitch.
Not cuz of the cancer, it’s all them battles that made you waste it.
good. I liked that.

Its a shame u focused so much on him dieing. A couple nice lines but slightly weaker than usual from u.

Smoke is stronger, I'll beat this herb..but it'll prove me wronger
Cuz I'd be the first...but the TM says someone already owns ya
nice.

Even so, I'll tear off Shabba's limbs, watch when I defeat this hoe
He'll be totally tubeular, when I hang him from the tree of woah
nice.

We really hate his rap, now he acts all hard with a strap
Leave rap aloan, but let it keep cash for all of your crap
hah nice.

Beatin me? ..your wrong to pursue, ...but I'll atone you dude
..By I'll throwing you a bone kid...since it might belong to you
ok.

Shabba thinks Joka is full of barrels of laughs, but when I blast ya...
I'll make sure you catch the joke... and you'll die from laughter
dope. ive seen barrel lines but every part strung together dopely.

I'll make him pail, ...Kid even my spelling put you threw hell...
Cuz I really meant I threw your raps in the bottom of my trash pail
not greatly liking.

I've brought you pain, but it's clear Shabba that you've trained..
I don't need elevation kid, just watch the way I rise above the Ranks
didnt rhyme well but decent.

overall smoka got this for havin better lines. I would say smoka's was more solid, i enjoyed all parts where ranks fell off here & there.

vote smoka.

Plutonium 09-02-04 12:31 AM

smoka had a way better structured verse, Ranks's verse was poorly structured:

Your record at RB don’t make you good, nigga you gotta be fronting.
They only let you win, so you can die feeling you accomplished something.
aight opener

Not for nothing, you wont be undefeated for long.
Mexicans can’t rip shit, but they sure can cut a good lawn.
hahaha...

Smoka’s ass, His verses will lyrically moon ya.
Ill pull this kids card, but this time it wont say get well sooner.
aight punch....

This dude thinks hes gully, ya fake image will ruin ya.
Last mags you dealt with, were in Triple L Jr.
nice punch as well

And how is it possible for his shit to be fresh to me.
When this Mexican is still rocking Southpole and Paco Jeans.
aight punch

And no matter how good you do in this battle, it’s a shame this kid.
Will only be remembered as the homo-thug with the rainbow sig.
aight punch

You got no life…and you know that’s what everyone will say bitch.
Not cuz of the cancer, it’s all them battles that made you waste it.
nice closer

Smoke is stronger, I'll beat this herb..but it'll prove me wronger
Cuz I'd be the first...but the TM says someone already owns ya
tight opener

Even so, I'll tear off Shabba's limbs, watch when I defeat this hoe
He'll be totally tubeular, when I hang him from the tree of woah
aight.......

We really hate his rap, now he acts all hard with a strap
Leave rap aloan, but let it keep cash for all of your crap
nice

Beatin me? ..your wrong to pursue, ...but I'll atone you dude
..By I'll throwing you a bone kid...since it might belong to you
aight punch

Shabba thinks Joka is full of barrels of laughs, but when I blast ya...
I'll make sure you catch the joke... and you'll die from laughter
nice hyping punch

I'll make him pail, ...Kid even my spelling put you threw hell...
Cuz I really meant I threw your raps in the bottom of my trash pail
good punch

I've brought you pain, but it's clear Shabba that you've trained..
I don't need elevation kid, just watch the way I rise above the Ranks
good closer

smoka has the better punches and flow and structure, ranks need to fix his structure which screws up the flow, keep elevating

vote: SmokaJoka

Ranks™ 09-04-04 01:12 AM

up.
will do votin tomorrow.

...Voke... 09-06-04 04:36 PM

Smoka Wins....

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