"hate"
 

my interprataion of my biggest inspiration is recorded through my creation of verses that straight blazin
and with my own conflation i'll start my own foundation
and since the start of civilazation
hate is what we've been facin
i'm racin,and pacin, cuz i'm sick of being patient
hate has been erasin since the emancipation proclomation
but we're stationed in a nation
where we see hate on many occasions
and dr. kings speech was amazin
but that dream we're still chasin
its puts me in infuriation, to see our world shakin
we crumbling and breakin
making racist statements
and if i hear another one, imma leave ya on tha pavement

any feedback???

coo drop man...

nice shit...vocab and flow was there, structure was cool, but there was no wordplay...work on that dawg...no disrespect...nice drop 7/10 homeboy holla at me

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hella tite dawg...da flow was perfect...ill...