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underdawgZ 08-30-04 09:16 PM

"it's a shame"
 
it'z a shame
young kidz trynna get sum brain

trynna show dey got game
from sum young slut dame

"it'z a shame"

a young ass hoe
where she bin, she don't even kno

juss a dirty disease bag
bang'in da wrong fag

until he pull out his mag
den she realize he aint juss dere to "shag"

she just a "rag"

used by many
by sum kid who had too many glasses a heni

i bet his folks'd pay a penny*
to see dey son alive one last tyme
befo dey found him on da ground, dead
from dat dirty hoe's disease,
cold, 'n sweaty*

G_$peed 08-30-04 09:17 PM

wtf need elevation...

underdawgZ 08-30-04 09:23 PM

i dunno.....juss don't lyke 'em hoes :nono:

i kno....needz wrk

G_$peed 08-30-04 09:23 PM

yeah jus to let u kno i wasnt hatin i aint a hater...

LIL'DREW 08-30-04 09:31 PM

nice drop...........most newbes dont even dont even spit shit dat tite...............cool shit

Replay 08-30-04 11:19 PM

ok the actual lyrics were good and so was the flow but way off on the style you gotta make you lines longer i no you won't get anyway with what you doing now but keep working at it.


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