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Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG vs shottaboy
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Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:40 PM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 05:54 PM.
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Yo Yo........Okay........
Check It............................ Ya See...I'ma Civial Citizen..... But If U Wanna BATTLE I Got The 'CARTEL' n I'm At The 'FRONT-LINE'With-Em... I'm Tired Of These Bitches Callin Me Out... The Punchline ''KING'' The Fucks That All ABOUT..? I'ma Whoop Ya Ass Worse Than 15 Jews Beatin A 'KRAUT'... Nigga When Its On Its On n U Bring A Fuckin 'PUNCHLINE'.. I Got A Fuckin Mic Cord To Choke U With When Its CRUNCHTIME.. Nigguh I'ma Beat U n Rob U Cause Likes Onyx ''Whats Yours Is Mine..!'' This A Battle So Come Take To The Jungle.... I Got My Guerillas n Your Fuckin SINGLE.... |
we all know dis fagget nigga just run around makin alot noise..
n we know his "s/n" but dis fukkin fag really neva "shot-a-boy" 6 wins 6 loses n ya'll sayin he's vet?.nobody read's ya text.... i rap offline but u like "scared gymnist" cuzz u "need da net".... im sick by my self nah i dont run with a crew,dis fukka is thru dude call ya self a "crip" cuzz u spit hot shit "once in da blue".. u aint gon hurt me disses,u lack skillz like wordplay n sickness u couldn't be "born gifted" even if ya "birthday was christmas" |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
...da king had betta punches...he made more sense...betta flow and shit... |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
ok this one is easy for me neways uhm i think king took this one for sure his last hit was the best totally took the battle...better flow and structure...better hits thats what takes a battle good job vote king |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
yo punchline king took this battle, but neither verse was all that great...punch took this battle becuz he threw more punches...his bars were kinda stretched, but punches are what win battles and he had them... |
return the fav guys vote on sindicate - sexy chick 1338 on the front lines
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
wow... i dont feel like puttin a whole explanation so heres feedback... aww what tha hell, i'll vote Punchline king gets this one because his flow was easy to follow and he actually had pretty good punchlines... i like that once in a blue shyt and that birthday was christmas... that was hot as for Shittyboy... damn, my bad Shottaboy (i really did think yo name was shittyboy)... as fo you, your flow and structure really messed this up for you... 3 line rhyme schemes really suck ass and make a rap terrible because there is a lack of balance in yo rap... after you spit tha third line its like people are still waitin to hear tha 4th... you didnt really have any punchlines and that difference also puts PunchlineKing ahead of you in this battle V/ DAPUNCHLINEKING |
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
i vote for punchline this battle was pretty good but punchline had betta flow, struc. betta multis i liked his wordplaya and punches betta too no hate but i jus think punch took this battle. return the favor wit an honost vote: lady fiya won this battle hands down she had betta personals and punches and wordplay she killed upfront son u need to elavate a lil ya verse was choppy had weak punches and multis wasnt there. so lady took it. return the favor please wit an honost vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146308 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146187 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146714 |
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