kahdaffi_black vs tha flash
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 11:13 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

kahdaffi_black has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 10:14 PM.

yo flash u aint ill ya whack, nigga u poultry but u smell like fish,nigga thats why u on a faggits wish list ya sick like that,
my bullets cure cataracts,the last thing ull see is a black mask
but the first thing ull see is a cap of dimadap(cough syrup)
cuzz you gonna cough when ya see the blast (gun) tell ya one thing nigga i got leadership from the republic that raised this beast kahdaffi black is a rapper to say the least...

reppin the Black Republic out laws 215 to 707

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 10:30 PM.

nigga it's horrible how my slugz punctured ya lungs
so i'm gonna stir up more beef then what's stuffed in bun
ya jumping gun getting anxious wanting rip me
but i'm gonna leave ya ass cooked well done or cripsy
u faggot nigga sitting there wanting to kiss me
so i'm gonna leave ya head flat like u was part of a frizby
fuck being ya friend
i'm gonna bring ya life to end
and leave ya face swollen up like kanye in the benz
so i'm gonna infect ya record like a computer virus
and ya hungry for some battles then step and try this
i'm destroying u nigga faggot ass kahdaffi black
and be prepared cause the red dots will paint ya face like a hockey mask
then you'll probably ask how i got so good
i bring more heat then what comes from under ya car hood
and right now i'm just blowing of steam
but i'll leave stars around ya head like ya part of the dream team
nigga u ain't no omega red
i brake ya neck and ya leg
oh no somebody get him a strecher
cause i'm gonna pen this nigga to death like a 4 page letter
so nigga when u see me get this win
just remember that if u believe god then battling me is a sin

uppin for votes, vote up on this and we'll return the favor

Voted For: Tha Flash

ok, the flash killed this....
opener - flash
closer - flash
flow - flash
punchez - flash
v/ flash, this wasnt a hater vote.

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

Voted For: Tha Flash

yo mayne flash got tha bangin flow goin n the verse was longer n hotter so was tha rhymes n tha flow. u need a lil betta punchlines but otha then that errything was kool
vote=the flash

Voted For: Tha Flash

kahdaffi.......

your verse was ok it was structured poorly and it didnt flow that well but the wordplay was good.....i like the lyrikal content u have theres somethin about it.....u didnt show ne real punch-lines or metaphores in this battle .......the verse was kind of original....vocab was weak didnt really see any evidence of talent in this verse so ill give you an overall vote 5/10
Overall=5/10

The Flash.......
This verse was one of the best out of the battle ive voted on with u in them u showed some SKILL in this one.....some advice is to keep the verses shorter and more packed with punches and multies...when u type a long verse it spread you talent ...which makes the power of your verse decrease...but besides that this had good flow to it.....good punches...was feelin it the whole way through an im gonna have to go with you on this one my overall vote is 6 out of 10
overall=6/10

Vote:The Flash

Voted For: kahdaffi_black

blacks drop was good alot shorter than tha flashs but that means nothing blacks punches were hard and flow was good not bad multis and flowed nicely. tha flash had smoe good punches but didnt use proper grammar so it made his verse hard to read at times like you left out words so it didnt make a whole lot of sense flow wasnt that great but not too bad needs improvment.

Vote - Kahdaffi_black

Voted For: Tha Flash

Im Votin For Tha Flash, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Flash Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

Voted For: Tha Flash

reading.... ight the flash took it by a long shot he had the best worst play and best rhymes,kahadaffi you could use a little more work your flow wasnt as on , and your word play wasnt as good.

punches/flow
personals/flow
structure/flow
meta's/flow
word choice and wordplay/ flow


winner/flow

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