sexychick1338 vs sindicate
 

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No Recycling
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sindicate has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:32 PM.

mortally DEPRESSED, from the powers i put to REST/
this bitch at her BEST, couldnt cause me to break SWEAT/
this emcee that ill wreck, youre HERBAL soul ill INGEST/
leaving you MESSED, with VERBAL holes in youre CHEST/
gripping youre stomach holding on to youre BREAST/
ill rip youre eyes out their socket and skull fuck yah to DEATH/

cause i spit sicka twisters then the wizard of OZ/
im lethal without a CAUSE, snatch youre tounge from youre lung and DISMANTLE youre JAW/
cant HANDLE youre FLAWS?/ ill tear yah to peaces with adamantium claws/



uhm on this one i decided to treat her as an emcee and not attack the fact that she is a woman like everyone else would do

SexyChick1338 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:50 PM.

U prolly know it's best to stay silent around grown folk,
cuz when ya paddlin up shit creek it ain't wise to show boat/
Don't matter if hope floats when ya chained to the ocean floor,
you're invitin trouble like ya name is an open door/
Think fame's bein known to boards, but it comes from choices,
winnin's hard work--SIN's still battlin unemployment/
Runnin's pointless, you never make it past the spam page,
drunk by yaself fightin pretend ninjas on tha rampage/
Shouldn't have battle me, best pray 4 rider votes to save u duke,
cuz ya runnin scared across the South like Rae Carruth......

ok we open for votes then
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uppin this shit come on peeps lets vote on this ..

Voted For: SexyChick1338

nice flow, you must be really hungry... i like the style... wish i could hear it

Voted For: SexyChick1338

...sin had a nice flow also, but some lines didnt make since, and some lines were incomplete..structure was aight tho, but the wordplay was poor...punches were ill and personal...not too many direct ones by either of you, but good shit

sexy-nice flow, many good lines that i seen in there, but you left a couple incomplete from wut i saw,....structure was str8. and yo wordplay was aight...punches were on target and personals, not too many DIRECT ones, but i seen 1 or 2....good shit

overall...work on personals...and wordplay yall....good battle overall

recap...vote goes to SexyChick1338



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Voted For: sindicate

i like it bt it needs one more thing. ok but i like it alot

Voted For: SexyChick1338

lol i like this verse sexychick got my vote good multis flow and punches i like the line where u said winnins hard work--sins still battlin unemployment nice. sin u had a good flow too and alright punches but i think sexy took u

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uppin this shit...........................................

Voted For: SexyChick1338

Sindicate, you let a girl rip you cuz, well not rip you, but i think that she won.. her punchlines were more creative, nothing special, but sindicate didn't really have any, like when she said you're inviting trouble like open doors, i get it, but it ain't that hard, yet, it was still a punch, sindicate didn't have any like that.. personals are lacking, both should of diged up some dirt..sexy chick gets it on structure too, her lines were way cleaner and more paralell.. vocab and wordplay also lacked because you both used basic word of expression to get your points across, but all in all

V/SexyChick1338

return favor right here thanx..
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