phive vs sonofisis#1
 

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Check in by: 09-04-04 at 02:13 PM

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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 02:18 PM.

Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 02:19 PM.

wuts this sonofisis name supposed ta mean its sounds like a disease that makes ya teeth turn green, im a machine and i wont stop till i drop, fuck this sono man ill use his head as a prop, you said you wanted someone ta battle, now im gonna herd you like cattle, yo sono yo rap has been sprayed, im gonna wash this nigga down like a bottle o gatorade, instead of rqapping you should finish the eleventh grade, your style3 is played fo real to live you fucking steal fo every meal, come out tha shade son before your skin turns teal, im gonna make this nigga wish that he never wanted to spit werds, sono you should go back to wonka and pack nerds, you shit packing queer, confront me ill slit ya throat with a broken beer, now before ya leave id just like ta say next tim,e ya wanna battle i betta get pay.

Iv'e Read Yo Rhymes Kid, And You Leave Me Bored To Death
He Spells His Name "Phive" coz he Can't Afford The F
You Ain't Shit Bitch, I'm changin The Game
Rap's In Ya Blood? Well I'm Drainin Ya Vains
What Type Of Fuckin Shit Do U Queers Get Taught?
I'll Shoot Ya Brain Out,
Make It Hit The Ground Hard So We Can Hear Ya Thoughts
I'm Gettin At You Like This Coz I Don't Really Like Punks
While My "Bars" are Worth Millions, Like Successful Night Clubs
Yo Whole Fuckin Life Is Jus Out Of Place
Yo Punches Don't Land, It's Like U Droped Em In Outer Space
You're a Clown Disgrace, With Out a Place, I'm Bound To Take Ya Head And Pound Ya Face, Yo styles a Waist
U Steped Up And Got Wrecked, ya Know How Us Soldiers Get
After I Win i'll Hold You're Defeat High So U'll Never Get Over It
Rip & Slash, Rip Ya Ass, I Bet This Kids A Fag who Fits In Drag
This Is Sad, Yo Window Of Opportunity's simply Tented Glass
Even Windows XP know U Suck, They Even Hate Stupid Asses
If U Write More That 100 words, then Yo Computer Crashes
I'm about to really hurt this Niggas feelings
If His Computer Had a Virus, he'd prolly give it Penecillin

what do you mean by a weak match up?

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

This was a easy win for Sonofisis#1,

(Iv'e Read Yo Rhymes Kid, And You Leave Me Bored To Death
He Spells His Name "Phive" coz he Can't Afford The F
You Ain't Shit Bitch, I'm changin The Game
Rap's In Ya Blood? Well I'm Drainin Ya Vains)

That first two bars was really good....LOL.

(I'm about to really hurt this Niggas feelings
If His Computer Had a Virus, he'd prolly give it Penecillin)

Aiight punch but, needs work on the end rhyming words.
Penecillin and Feelings?? Don't actually rhyme buddy.
But still a good punch.



Phive- Structure is all around bad, to the point in which I didn't read the whole thing. I don't know where your rhymes begin and end sometimes. You need to work on a solid structure.


Opener-Sonofisis
Punches-Sonofisis
Multis-Sonofisis
Punches-Sonofisis
Closer-Sonofisis

Final Vote- Sonofisis, hands down.


Phive-You need to work on elevating son. Try to control your structure a lil too.

you got good flow by the way im white my nigga wutts up

my nigga????? I just commented in a thread on how you white motha fuckas always carelessly use that word, are you atleast ghetto, coz if you're not then don't call me a nigga, if you are, then big ups.. but thanx for the compliment tho..

Ups

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

sono took it...betta flow............................

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that shyt was hot!!! it was hilarious too... this was a really one sided battle!!! tha structure wasnt tha best i've seen but those punchlines were. that shyt was hella good... lemme stop dick ridin... if you write more than 100 words yo computer crashes? that was funny... these punchlines clearly won the battle as they were better than Phive's whole verse!!!

phive, yo flow was really hard to follow seeing as you wrote it like a young authors story. it seemed like you didnt put any thought into your verse... there were no real punches except herd you like cattle which makes no sense. this verse seemed like he put down whateva rhymed easiest.

v/ Isis

Voted For: Sonofisis#1

sonofisis wins this battle pretty well. His punches were on point n structure was pretty good
some multies were kinda lame tho
but other than that the verse was pretty good
phive needs to work on that structure its really killin him cuz u cant tell where to stop
plus the punches w erent that hot n he needs to b more creative
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