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*LoYaLiTy™! vs sHoTTaBoY
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-02-04 at 06:23 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
*LoYaLiTy™! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:54 AM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:55 AM.
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This Battle Gon' Be Over Before You Can Say 'ohwee'..
I'm Spittin 6 Hot Lines In 3 Minutes My Friend n Thats QUALITY.. I Can Merk You By Sayin One Lame Word Like DIRTBAG... This Ol' Cross Dressin Ass Nigguh Got His Mommas Panties n HANDBAG... At The Bar Actin Like A Chick Smokin Dicks Like The British Smoke FAGS.. This The Last Line n I'ma Bet This DumbFuck Already Raizin The White FLAG..!! (British Call Cancer Sticks ...Fags) |
never shot shit ya names wack, its obvious shottaboy takes it from the back, a pussy nutsack,from the looks of your verse i can truthfully say its skill you lack, your rec is sad, admit it kid pissin is the only time you got a consistent flow, goin toe 2 toe with me hoe, honestly kid you'd be better off claimin a no-show, Your lines are fucked for shore, like a beachhouse in the center of the earths core, dumb whore,ya rhymes wouldnt be elevated if you wrote them on da tenth floor, |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
loyalty took this one...hands down...he made more sense in his rhymes...had more clever punches...betta structure...betta flow... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
When People Say ''That Made More Sense'' ....Like My Shit Didnt Make Sense...
Ya Either Gotta Be Stupid Or Illiterate If It Didnt Make Sense............... But Whatever...... Upppppin 4 Fuckin Votes |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
1st verse dint really have any punches that connected,some self glorification in your verse did'nt help...work on your structure,n elevate your punches...2nd verse i liked your closer but the rest was average but good structure n flow overall betta drop....... |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
aiight man dis was a close battle but a good one.... opener - loyality closer - shot flow - shot punchez - shot v/ i just connected betta and thought he landed betta punchez than loyality.....badluck loyality |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
shotty.... damn dog....you came weak this time...you threw up four lame basic bars.....no punches or personals.....weak flow no effort....lack of vocab....overall i would have to say it give your verse about a 4/10 Loyality you came with come good disses no hard hitting punches but some that made me laugh....u had some good metaphores....the constant flow was your best...your verse flowed well u had mediocre vocab....u structured your verse well....and in my opinion u cam harder then shotty so my vote goes to you...... overall:6/10 Vote:Loyalty sole* |
Yea Yea, I Know.........
I Thought This Fool Would Be An Easy Win So I Came At Him Elementary..... I Thought I'd Juss Type Some Shit n Have Merked This Fool.. I Shouldda Tried Now Cause I Look Stupid, But Whatever lol.. That Kat Is Garbage n I'd Happily Have A Battle Knowin I Gotta Put Effort InTo It... |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
loyality won dis by a chin hair he had jus a lil betta flow n tha rhymes was prtty tight. the punchlines n vocab could b betta but it was iight vote=loyality |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
wack battle...nah,jus playin..it was aight.. shotta some ok punches but ya flow was off n your opener was self glorification,british line was ok....but i thought loyalty had betta punches n had more content... |
Voted For: *LoYaLiTy™!
Loyality took this one...cuz (his or hers) punches were harder den shottaboy's...tha flow was aight..and tha structure wasn't all stretched out..but tha real reason he took this one iz becuz (his or hers) punches were hard and they landed... |
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