Must Peep This, (Gifted-2)
 

Anyone' Ever felt so helpless, And nobody-liked-you,
Picture yourself In a "black" community, And ur the only-white-dude'
Look at Book's, "tragedy" at every page u flip-through'
Racism'Murder, and all these police dont even get "clues"

What does it take to "prophecy", Do I grow wings, heal and fly?'
Why all these question's, why all these race's, Skeer'and'fight'
All black or all-white, Hispanic to all race's
No matter who you are, God work's in mysterious place's

Corruption's In the sky's, Terror' Seeking always
Fear streaking'In skools, "Columbine" Kids in the hallways'
Piece by Piece, Fallin apart UNreligiously'
Takin god outta school' Hmm, more fights, gay right's, Whatta "Mystery"

All my life I Try To'do'what I'can'
But suffer many string's, just to make an impress-shen(impression)'
Personnel shit's crazy, and the "heart" and morals are missen'
This world needs a miracle......,and its me..I am "gifted"

deep shit...feelin this one more than the first...dont get me wrong dawg...they was both tite...but I feel you put a little more into this one than the other one...once again feeling tha topic...nice shit...8/10

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that was tight nite wreckage
good ryhme
good stucture
most off all wreck when i was readen it i was feeling it
so id give 9/10
i felt though the last verse was a under the first 3 i liked the "impress-shen"
bit that was heavy

safe..

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