WORDPLAYA vs keen2B
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 11:09 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

keen2B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 11:18 AM.

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 11:21 AM.

aight check it mr.or mrs wordplaya
the only thing u playa with is ur
pennis hardner applicater.
u rub it on and ur shit starts to get big
all 3inches are now up and offically big
sorry did i say the word big
am- i meant to say tiny ur dick is so small
am-- no sorry theres only one word tiny
but what can u do
u wana b me
if i wos u i would to.
my words are true i aint playen
i take my battles seriously
thats why i aint complain about battlen
u even though ur so lame and
even though u in the wrong game and/ il still give u the chance to battle the keen2bmanic
even though ur well below me so holla back

my rhymes is lryrical ebola cold as Artic seas
so his 'computer go up in smoke like 'P.C.'p
he manifested of dirt procreated of garbage
i split his body parts in buildings n call dat shit A-PART-MENTS
garuntee diss fag work in da 'meat' department
2 keep 'dick' in his mouf all day 2 me dats nonsense
while i melt down rubbers into a tire n call it GOODYEAR
kuz i fuck bitches 365 days but he's a queer
hear 2B or not 2b dats da metaphorical question
so i'll make em 'pay' 4 diss battle 2 lEARN his lesson
uncontested second guess dawg u cumin up short
sorry as emcees like illegal aliens da get export(ed)

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Word you took it.

Punchlines coming from wordplaya was better and nmore thought out, keens was basic and easy.. wordplay on both sides was basic, can't call who took that. personals also lacked, vocab lacked, but as far as structure, wordplaya got that too, keen's was off, and the rhymes weren't paralell.. so overall, i vote for wordplaya..

return the favor right here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146839

thanx 4 ya honest vote
we still uppin 4 sum more
honest votes ya

can u return an honest vote in my link?

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Keen Half Ya Shit Didn't even Rhyme ... Structure And Flow Was Fucked ... Punches Weak ...

Playa Some Good Shit there ... Had Some Nice Punches ... But It Was Pretty Much An Easy Battle For Ya ...

Vote: Wordplaya

thanx dawg we still uppin 4 sum honest
votes ya

yo we still uppin 4 sum honest votes
ya so cum vote we'll return da favor

still uppin 4 sum honest votes ya so
cum n vote we'll do da same

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Wordplaya got this quite easily in my opinion...Keen 2B i think you still need a lot of work on your stucture and how to use punches, personals e.t.c...i had the same problem when i 1st came here the thing is the structure is too small it does flow ok but it doesn't make much difference if the other parts of the verse like punches are included...ur verse was overall very newb but u are so you have time to work on this...don't take this as a hate vote because i'm not liking the verse...but what i'm doin is giving you some advice if u want to...write some open mics and try and work on ur wordplay and try and extend the structure while keeping the flow at a good rhythm...but now...you wont win many battles while you are dropping like that...

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

ummm... yeah...keen2b that was probably the worst verse i've ever heard in my life no offense but you suck i've gotta give my vote to wordplaya because keen2b your weak dude no beef

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

very good battle. i love it. i gave it to word cuz his punches were 1*/* better.it was a close battle tho.the rhyme about apartments was the best punch.a definite 8.5/10.
good wordplay, and everything connected. there was no ramblin