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-FlamboyanT- vs PayDay
Battle Rules:
5-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-05-04 at 01:44 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 01:45 PM.
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-FlamboyanT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 01:10 PM.
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FlamboyanT ugh ugh ugh…fuckin check this
Im Rippin your style~n’ pullin ure teeth like a dentist~I don’t miss 1 Thinking you got rhymezzz is relentless~so don’t bet this 2 Ill crisp you like a toaster~ull get burnt to no repair~cajun whigga 3 pray to god for dispare~u couldn’t get a proper burial if u were a REAL NIGGA! 4 shit'll get DRASTIC~wrappin FlamboyanTs’ body in plastic~ so Send a HURSE 5 Leaven’ FlamboyanT a has been~ holdn’ a grudge~ n’ droppin his ashes~ it’s a CURSE 6 No disrespect~POTATO CHIP~ get off my dick bitch~ claimin that youre a real G 7 Lost in a trance~your no ANGEL~ So why do u claim to B~ you could NEVER heal ME 8 Ure getting donkey punched* just like a pro~takin it all in just like u a top notch HOE 9 ure SPEADIN ya cheeks for da doc to go cleanin~hold ya DIRTY ASS gums b 4 speakin~now u know! 10 *donkey punched- wen u take it up the ass and the person cums in u |
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U a fake ass emcee dogg to me u aint shyt.... U already set up da battle so y da hell aint u spit.... u a bitch, pussy nigga ma skillz iz legit.... To win dis battle u need skillz sumtin u need to get.... Dis nigga prolly thought lemme go beat dis l newb.... but understand dis i'll beat u n ya whole fukin crew b..... N u wack so derre aint nuttin dat u can do to me.... NIgga ma wordz is fly like i threw it off a rooftop.... N if u Come test me u gonn c ya tooth drop.... IM takin dis new spot, U cood catch n a BMW convertible black wit a blue top.... We gonn c who crew hot, wen u drop like hot potatoez.... Ya shirt gonn b lookin like u got hit wit a lot tomatoez.... Ma wordz set fire i blow off a fukin cab roof.... I leev payday chipped up like ma nigga Fab tooth.... U neva c me in a wak ar i push Bmw'z Or a Maybak... Spit so sik System'll hav to tell me to laybak... Payday dont fuk wit me or get ya wig pushed way bak...1 |
uppin fo votez.....
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Voted For: -FlamboyanT-
payday verse was streched flow was a little off punches and disses were weak no hate just work on those no real wordplay a 3/10 flamboyant good structure except it streched a little on that black and blue line still good and a nice flow with good wordplay and ok punches got you this a 5/10 |
Voted For: PayDay
IIGHT CLEARLY PAY TOOK THIS STRCUTURE WAS OK HE HAD HARDER PUNCHLINES HE HAD OK METAS CULD USE A LIL WORK ON YA FLOW FLAM #1 U USED "U" 2 MANI TIMES U WASNT REALLI BATTLIN U WAS TALKIN BOUT YA SELF YA SUM OF THA WORDS LOOKED LIKE U JUSS THOUGHT OF 2 MAKE UP EX Dis nigga prolly thought lemme go beat dis l newb.... but understand dis i'll beat u n ya whole fukin crew b..... WAT THA HELL ISS A "CREW B" USE REAL WORDS N ELIVATE |
Voted For: PayDay
payday took this...it was a real weak verse, but he didnt self glorify...flam did the whole verse... let me break it down... Im Rippin your style~n’ pullin ure teeth like a dentist~I don’t miss 1 Thinking you got rhymezzz is relentless~so don’t bet this 2 5/10 Ill crisp you like a toaster~ull get burnt to no repair~cajun whigga 3 pray to god for dispare~u couldn’t get a proper burial if u were a REAL NIGGA! 4 5/10...was weak shit'll get DRASTIC~wrappin FlamboyanTs’ body in plastic~ so Send a HURSE 5 Leaven’ FlamboyanT a has been~ holdn’ a grudge~ n’ droppin his ashes~ it’s a CURSE 6 7/10...creative...well kinda No disrespect~POTATO CHIP~ get off my dick bitch~ claimin that youre a real G 7 Lost in a trance~your no ANGEL~ So why do u claim to B~ you could NEVER heal ME 8 6/10...played Ure getting donkey punched* just like a pro~takin it all in just like u a top notch HOE 9 ure SPEADIN ya cheeks for da doc to go cleanin~hold ya DIRTY ASS gums b 4 speakin~now u know! 10 8/10...donkey punched....ghetto ure verse aint wat it usually is...u got to come back wit dat fire G...come on...dont dissapoint... flamboyant...ures wasnt wat i thought it would b..ure a new b but u did come hard...just not as hard...just elevate and ule b there....no hate G |
Voted For: PayDay
payday took dis...betta punches...betta flow...betta structure...betta wordplay...betta overall verse...you know...betta content and concept and shit... gave it to payday... |
uppin this shit for some votes....................
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Voted For: PayDay
punches/pd meta's/pd opener/pd closer/pd personals/pd structure/flam pd took it with ease, flam youse was good dont get me wrong but he owned u in the rhym'n and what not so yea vote// PAYDAY |
uppin fo dem votes....jus need one more....upppin...
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Voted For: -FlamboyanT-
i like this nigga even tho u got to much of tha same rhymin thing u mad nice wit tha srhymes |
nice i did what i had to do and that vote for tha better nigg
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