SexyChick1338 vs PayDay
 

Battle Rules:

10-unlimited lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriddin

aight here tha rules...good luck...~1~

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 03:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 03:39 PM.

SexyChick1338 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 03:48 PM.

This rookie wants to battle but doesn’t know BARS ARE//
Have this kid in a coma so quick, he’ll be won’t be seeing “FAR STARS”// *

It’s prertty said that you just RAPE YA EX//
As you FLEX ya dickryde people cuz ya think your rich off welfare CHECKS//

I got ya CLUELESS, no surprise I’m making ya CREW-LESS//
I'm gonna be makin ya pay fa THIS //

I’m stealin ya “Sole” like I’m leaving ya SHOE-LESS//
With ya name is the title all the vets saying “WHO DIS??” //

This kid is getting shot up, so he’s “ BASHFUL AND YELPS//
To be me this dumbass even had to ASK FOR MY HELP// *

I'm built to last~ up in that ass I make all the noise~
How you lookin like Emmitt Smith~ runnin back to get your boys~

When shit gets tight~like Barry White I practice what I preach~
Little shorties wanna be down like Brandy when they hear me speak~

Shakin and bakin and takin yo shit~Beatin your pussy and wreckin yo clit~
I catch you and I dead you~I got you if I shot at you~got yo goods~pilled yo cap and dip~

a skitzofranic that's makin you panic when I pull this gage~
I do more licks and throw more kicks~ than Johnny Cage~(mortal combat)

I'm fuckin what you been talkin~you've been walkin~stalkin like a hawk~
And trigger be triggin~ when I click it cause my pain ain't stickin~crumbles like chalk~

Gats and glocks~moeny and rocks~you best to believe I gets the loot~
Fuckin you in your pussy hole~watch your little body shoot~

You're fuckin with a lunatic~ a psycho in a war zone~so girl cover your shit
Nobody's boostin me~I'm tootin cane on my own~this aint no porn skit

Voted For: PayDay

payday took this by a small margin...let me break this down...

This rookie wants to battle but doesn’t know BARS ARE//
Have this kid in a coma so quick, he’ll be won’t be seeing “FAR STARS”// * 5/10...played

It’s prertty said that you just RAPE YA EX//
As you FLEX ya dickryde people cuz ya think your rich off welfare CHECKS// 6/10...creative

I got ya CLUELESS, no surprise I’m making ya CREW-LESS//
I'm gonna be makin ya pay fa THIS // 5/10....2nd line was lame

I’m stealin ya “Sole” like I’m leaving ya SHOE-LESS//
With ya name is the title all the vets saying “WHO DIS??” // 4/10...not made for a battle

This kid is getting shot up, so he’s “ BASHFUL AND YELPS//
To be me this dumbass even had to ASK FOR MY HELP// 4/10..i dont think he asked for ure help...payday is well capable...


I'm built to last~ up in that ass I make all the noise~
How you lookin like Emmitt Smith~ runnin back to get your boys~ 5/10...played out...coulda said it better

When shit gets tight~like Barry White I practice what I preach~
Little shorties wanna be down like Brandy when they hear me speak~ 5/10...weak ass line

Shakin and bakin and takin yo shit~Beatin your pussy and wreckin yo clit~
I catch you and I dead you~I got you if I shot at you~got yo goods~pilled yo cap and dip~ 7/10...a strong line...mulities

a skitzofranic that's makin you panic when I pull this gage~
I do more licks and throw more kicks~ than Johnny Cage~(mortal combat) 7/10...good word use...

I'm fuckin what you been talkin~you've been walkin~stalkin like a hawk~
And trigger be triggin~ when I click it cause my pain ain't stickin~crumbles like chalk~8/10...hiddin meaning..pussy crumbles like chalk...creative

Gats and glocks~moeny and rocks~you best to believe I gets the loot~
Fuckin you in your pussy hole~watch your little body shoot~6/10...kinda waek...but hits

You're fuckin with a lunatic~ a psycho in a war zone~so girl cover your shit
Nobody's boostin me~I'm tootin cane on my own~this aint no porn skit 7/10...self glorifacation...but a strong line

payday was just overall a lil better...and sexychicks verse seems prewritin...my opinion...but u both have to elevate....sexy u can tell ure young...ure so inocent wit wat u say...come harder...and both flowed...vote PAYDAY

uppin for votes...dont let this sleep...............~1~

This was feedback posted for PayDay
 

blah one sided battle agian in my eyes
payday you was iight you had some iight shit in yours but not that good

Check: yours was to basic no direct punches or personals you need elevatign

I would vote Paydat

Voted For: SexyChick1338

How you lookin like Emmitt Smith~ runnin back to get your boys~
^^^PayDay seen dat in another battle so u lose my vote
flow was ok verse was basic ok drop dough

Sexy ya punches were basic need 2 be more complex
wordplay was ok overall ok verse

vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: PayDay

payday you won this easily...no competition dawg...came harder with tha punches and metaphors...flow was there throughout ya verse...sexychick you didnt really have any decent punches except tha last one and some of your bars werent even tha same length...gotta give this to my boy payday...

Voted For: SexyChick1338

ima go wit sexxi on dis she had a betta flow n she had sum nice vocab n tha punchlines were tight 2 so...
vote=sexychick

uppin for honest EXPLAINED VOTES..................

Voted For: PayDay

payday

I'm built to last~ up in that ass I make all the noise~
How you lookin like Emmitt Smith~ runnin back to get your boys~
^UNORTHODOX ON THE WORDPLAY

When shit gets tight~like Barry White I practice what I preach~
Little shorties wanna be down like Brandy when they hear me speak~
^THE BRANDY THING IS PLAYD'
Shakin and bakin and takin yo shit~Beatin your pussy and wreckin yo clit~
I catch you and I dead you~I got you if I shot at you~got yo goods~pilled yo cap and dip~
^NALL MAN YOU TRIPPIN WITH THESE LINES
a skitzofranic that's makin you panic when I pull this gage~
I do more licks and throw more kicks~ than Johnny Cage~(mortal combat)
^DECENT
I'm fuckin what you been talkin~you've been walkin~stalkin like a hawk~
And trigger be triggin~ when I click it cause my pain ain't stickin~crumbles like chalk~
^YOU STRETCHIN LINES CRAZY
Gats and glocks~moeny and rocks~you best to believe I gets the loot~
Fuckin you in your pussy hole~watch your little body shoot~
^NOT STRONG MAN.
You're fuckin with a lunatic~ a psycho in a war zone~so girl cover your shit
Nobody's boostin me~I'm tootin cane on my own~this aint no porn skit
^ SHIT WHAT CAN I SAY?

YOU CAME WEAK PAYDAY. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FIRE YOU UNLEASHED WHEN WE BATTLED? WAS YOU TAKIN' IT EASY CAUSE IT WAS A WOMAN YOU WAS BATTLIN'?

SEXYCHICK1338

This rookie wants to battle but doesn’t know BARS ARE//
Have this kid in a coma so quick, he’ll be won’t be seeing “FAR STARS”// *
^STOP STRETCHIN LINES EVERYBODY. IT DON'T READ GOOD IN TEXT BATTLIN'
It’s prertty said that you just RAPE YA EX//
As you FLEX ya dickryde people cuz ya think your rich off welfare CHECKS//
^NOPE. SIMPLE, TOO SIMPLE
I got ya CLUELESS, no surprise I’m making ya CREW-LESS//
I'm gonna be makin ya pay fa THIS //
^NOW WAY YOU'LL WIN IF THE LAST 2 BARS ARE AS WEAK AS THIS IS
I’m stealin ya “Sole” like I’m leaving ya SHOE-LESS//
With ya name is the title all the vets saying “WHO DIS??” //
^BETTER STUFF
This kid is getting shot up, so he’s “ BASHFUL AND YELPS//
To be me this dumbass even had to ASK FOR MY HELP// *

OK I'M DISSAPOINTED IN PAYDAY. YOU MUST'VE BEEN OFF OR SOMETHING CAUSE THIS A BELOW-PAR VERSE FOR YOU. WASN'T FEELING EITHER VERSE, BUT SEXYCHICK SAME SO UNBELIEVABLY SIMPLE AND TRITE THAT THIS IS GONNA HAVE TO GO TO PAYDAY

Voted For: SexyChick1338

aight payday you need some punches i think your opener was your only 1 n it was weak,remember this is a battle,sexy basically you had some ok punches best was your 4th bar,
worst 1 was your opener...try n get more personal by including his name.......both still need elevation but payday your whole verse was self glorification..not dope at all...!!

Voted For: PayDay

payday won...his punches hit harder...his flow was betta...he had an overall betta verse...he barley won it...it was close...

gave it to payday...

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